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04/18/2005 11:25:17 PM |
*Critique Club*
I think that the 'cursive e' is clear in the photo, but there are definately a lot of distracting surrounding elements. The photo is very cluttered with other trees, branches, sticks, leaves...etc.
The entire photo is all a very similar color. Muddy brown. That lacks visual appeal to me.
I am not sure how you could have captured this shot without the other elements or with any variation in colors, so I don't think that this shot could be improved upon. I think that the best decision here would be to have chosen a different subject.
Focus seems a tad soft, I think I would like to have seen some detail in the bark. A crisper focus with a little lighting ON the subject could have brought out some more detail.
Overall I like the cursive e, it is definately original, but the photo of the cursive e just doesn't draw me in.
~Heather~
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04/12/2005 11:16:16 PM |
| too many distractions. Where is your subject? |
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04/11/2005 02:39:55 PM |
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04/11/2005 12:23:06 PM |
| Cool branch, but not the most interesting composition. |
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04/09/2005 09:39:34 PM |
| Now that is a cursive e tree if I've ever saw one! Something in the right hand back ground is a bit distracting though. |
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04/08/2005 03:19:03 PM |
| too many elemants interfere with the main subject |
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04/08/2005 01:03:48 PM |
| too many trees. i know that there is tons of letters in trees and sticks... but everyone is doing it |
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04/08/2005 10:36:53 AM |
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04/07/2005 02:37:34 PM |
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04/07/2005 10:34:49 AM |
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04/07/2005 10:13:55 AM |
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04/06/2005 10:08:28 PM |
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04/06/2005 05:22:52 PM |
| I see the e. Barely. Background is waaaayyyy busy. |
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04/06/2005 03:18:24 PM |
| I see where you are coming from. Good one, 10 |
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04/06/2005 01:21:00 PM |
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04/06/2005 10:23:57 AM |
| This is a nice shot. I like how you were able to capture a cursive E instead of just a simple normal E. I also like the background and surrouneings in this image. Nice work. |
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04/06/2005 09:32:44 AM |
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04/06/2005 07:47:13 AM |
| Good subject, but poor contrast. Many pictures in this challenge were made in forests like it. All had the same issue. |
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04/06/2005 01:32:09 AM |
| A closer crop would have brought my attention to the E better. |
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