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04/24/2005 11:30:17 PM |
*Critique Club*
Now this is some extreme action. Congrats on capturing this very neat scene.
The things I notice about this are things that have already been mentioned, but something that I don't think was mentioned is that the ball seems odd. It might be cause it's a different kind of soccer, but it seems like a different kind of ball. Shiny and no lines.
The background seems a tad dark, but I think that is ok here since the subjects are light and they stand out on the dark background. The only issue I see with the background is the garbage bin, but it's not like you could have just walked over and moved it anyway.
The whites do seem a tad too white in comparison to the rest of the photo.
Focus is also slightly a bit too soft. I wish this were more 'stopped' kind of like frozen in time, but you don't get this shot every day, I'm sure. I think I'd like to see the faces with more detail.
I like the framing, and I also like the dust coming from the ground. Really creates the feeling that something serious is happening there.
Love the scene in general. great capture of the 2 guys battling it out in mid air.
Very nice. ~Heather~ |
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04/17/2005 04:27:33 PM |
great capture of the movement
good luck |
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04/17/2005 09:35:04 AM |
| Very cool shot, nicely caught and composed. |
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04/14/2005 06:48:13 PM |
| what great stop motion! sharpness could definitely have been better, though, and a few adjustments to the levels would also have helped (6) |
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04/13/2005 01:35:35 PM |
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04/12/2005 10:47:40 PM |
| Excellent action and composition! Love the possitions of the the players and the ball, love the dust clouds and a lovely green background, It would be perfect if only cropped a little more and esp if sharper clearer image like 'tackle' and 'ruck'. Whites and the ball are a little hot. Otherwise Cool! - 8 |
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04/12/2005 03:18:52 AM |
| Not the best shot ever taken, but GREAT action!! Love it! |
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04/11/2005 01:15:59 PM |
| Yess, Maradona is back! Great shot! |
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04/11/2005 12:25:32 PM |
| Just WOW Even from the thumbnail this looks stunning. I really hope you do well! |
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04/11/2005 03:15:13 AM |
| thats a tough lookin defensemen there, look out ! |
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04/11/2005 01:24:04 AM |
| love the dust coming off the ground...fantastic |
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04/11/2005 01:18:35 AM |
excellent capture!
Wow..those guys can really jump! |
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