*Critique Club*
We meet again here in Critique Club, almost 2 years later. Wow, how time has flown since the primary colors challenge.
Speaking of colors, I think that maybe the bright color of the bridge is distracting from the abandoned building. Which actually is ok for the photo, but I think for the challenge, I would have liked to have the main focus the building rather than the bridge, which I feel seems like the main subject now.
Focus seems ok, although blurred in some spots, nothing distracting there.
Lighting on the building is alright, but the upper right corner too me, is just too bright. See how it kind of bleeds into the roof? The bright sky takes away the detail of the roof edge. I'm sure there was not much detail there to begin with, but I guess what I'm saying is that the edge line is partially missing. There, maybe that makes more sense. lol
I like how the vines are growing up the walls, that makes this look like it's been there awhile with no love. It was a good building for the challenge.
~Heather~
Message edited by author 2005-04-25 01:34:18. |
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