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05/02/2005 10:36:00 AM |
Critique Club:
There is something missing in the picture. I like the shadows and the contrast between the light areas and the dark. Someone sitting on the bench, maby sleeping. And I think it would have been better if you would have taken the picture straight on the wall. Not with this angle. Just my opinion though :)
Good luck in future challanges |
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04/25/2005 10:26:35 PM |
| Very nice study of light, shadow and texture. |
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04/25/2005 04:48:10 PM |
| Interesting. Croped a bit too tight on the left border - the window. Otherwise good use of light. |
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04/25/2005 04:42:20 PM |
| I would have been tempted to look at it straight on, its a same the Left hand windoe is cropped out a tad, not sure if this would have been possible though! Also I find the bottom shadow a bit overpowering, but I love the one running across the centre of the image, good spotting! |
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04/24/2005 03:16:51 PM |
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04/24/2005 09:45:37 AM |
| The composition is not very strong, and the picture is mainly in shadow. You might want to reshoot this and focus on one window when the sun is facing it. |
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04/24/2005 08:55:59 AM |
| The shadow in this is great but it lacks the power of color. Good crop. |
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04/24/2005 01:58:10 AM |
| you might find this not doing well... the pic itself is not appealing, the subject lacks sharpness and detail. |
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04/23/2005 07:03:52 PM |
| not a very interesting subject when compared to 500 other entries |
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04/21/2005 09:39:56 PM |
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04/21/2005 07:16:29 AM |
| interesting image. i doubt it's blowing your scores through the roof, but, all the same, i like it. good luck! |
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