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05/01/2005 11:28:49 PM |
You've captured the ring and backround beautifully. It looks like you ran into one of the challenges I noticed when shooting jewely--the reflected background. As I look at the reflection, I'm curious, did you shoot this in a window display? If so, I'm impressed. If there were some way you could shoot it without getting your own reflection in the ring, that would probably make that part of the reflection less distracting and more ambient. I also like your font choice and position, although the lightness of the chosen color makes it hide somewhat. (7) |
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05/01/2005 09:41:39 PM |
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05/01/2005 08:41:19 PM |
Very nice lay-out, similar to how an advertisement would look. The lace is a nice compliment to the overall effect. Shame about your reflection in the band, but suchis life in an open challenge. (6) |
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05/01/2005 07:55:22 PM |
Very well done. Bumping up. |
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05/01/2005 06:15:27 PM |
You can see your reflection.... |
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05/01/2005 02:46:05 PM |
Need to eliminate the reflections of you! |
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05/01/2005 12:33:02 PM |
Might want to try to get rid of the reflection on the ring. Nice clouds though. |
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05/01/2005 10:41:55 AM |
Can see you in the ring's reflection! That would not be a good thing for an advertisment.Background is nice but lighting is very flat |
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05/01/2005 09:50:22 AM |
The idea and composition are very good. I can see you took this outside to gain maximum light, its a shame your reflection together with the background and sky is sheown in the ring.
A light tent would help manage reflections |
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05/01/2005 01:28:26 AM |
reflections really are not a good thing here |
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04/30/2005 07:44:06 PM |
Nice--there's a reflection, but because of the convex shape of the ring that's pretty much inevitable. I like the composition, and the subtle border. |
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04/30/2005 07:15:05 PM |
A super image I really like the reflections in the ring and the softness of the material it comes together well 7 |
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04/30/2005 05:52:45 PM |
Nice crisp shot of the ring - I do not like seeing you in the reflection - It would have been awesome if the reflection was a bride and groom - so you could hide the cam - It would have easily been top 5! Bumping up anyway! 8 |
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04/29/2005 10:34:21 PM |
Good concept; nice blend of gold and white. However, it looks like the photographer's reflection in the ring (if you could have somehow worked that out to be a couple embracing in a kiss, that would have relected wonderfully!) 7 |
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04/29/2005 02:52:29 PM |
This would be much better if I didn't see the reflection of the photographer in the ring. |
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04/29/2005 01:46:42 PM |
This is a really nice photo that would work as an advertisment. However, the reflection of you shooting the picture takes away from that. |
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04/29/2005 08:54:10 AM |
The would have been a beautiful ad if I couldn't see you and what looks like maybe a house or vehicle in the ring. |
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04/29/2005 07:23:41 AM |
Very well done. what a shine on that ring. 9 |
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04/29/2005 06:18:49 AM |
great pic but you need to watch your reflections :) |
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04/28/2005 03:15:24 PM |
great stuff.....although I think I can see you in the ring. well done though. |
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04/28/2005 02:46:38 PM |
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04/28/2005 02:03:06 PM |
Nice reflection on the ring. |
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04/28/2005 10:35:30 AM |
I like the framing of the ring, there seems to be a bit of noise on the white though |
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04/28/2005 08:10:54 AM |
Beautiful shot!!!! Concept, focus, the lace and the writing are all very professional. |
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04/27/2005 11:51:00 PM |
You have a pretty significant reflection in the ring, something usually avoided in ads. I like the colors and layout/concept. |
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04/27/2005 09:44:50 PM |
Nice idea. Your reflection in the ring is very dominating, however. |
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04/27/2005 05:06:31 PM |
the fact i can see sort of a landscpae complete with houses and sky and photographer on the ring is a bit distracting, |
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04/27/2005 12:03:21 PM |
Looks like a greeting card. That's a compliment. Very nice composition. Nice look at the photographers reflection in the ring too! ;^) So close... Good luck in the challenge. |
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04/26/2005 08:38:00 PM |
Great comp! The colors jump out at me, the subject is very crisp, but the details need revisions. I'd suggest a different font with a different color (darker and larger, even though I can see what you're trying to do here.) Also the DOF make me feel as if I'm looking at it sideways. |
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04/26/2005 07:09:17 PM |
Nice compostion, but your reflection in the ring is a minus. the text does not add to the image. |
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04/26/2005 05:54:18 PM |
I seee youuuuuuu
Mwahahahhaa |
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04/26/2005 01:26:13 PM |
nice shot. IMO the reflection of you in the ring taking the pic takes away from it.but all in all good work 7 |
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04/26/2005 12:57:51 PM |
this is a nice composition. |
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04/26/2005 11:54:41 AM |
The reflection is interesting. I think you've tried to use it for purpose; that wouldn't work well in an advertisement. As art, it's nice. 6 |
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04/26/2005 10:25:39 AM |
Your reflection is the only issue I see. |
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04/26/2005 07:18:04 AM |
Nice setup, only thing I can see your reflection in the ring! Good shot. |
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04/25/2005 11:17:01 PM |
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04/25/2005 09:03:03 PM |
If your reflection wasnt in the ring, it would have been perfect. |
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04/25/2005 06:25:59 PM |
I like this and I feel it would make a good ad. The lighting is soft and flattering and the picture was processed very cleanly and without artifactual distractions. The reflection does not conjure images of heaven for me, and perhaps you could have incorporated this theme into your advertisement writing rather than in the title.
Not saying this would work better, but I would suggest "Heavenly gifts for your love", and to further direct the voter, leave the title as-is.
Alternatively you could have chosen a more difficult route and shoot for a cleaner reflection (i.e. without those odd lights points or perhaps without that vaguely house-like structure?).
Good luck. 7 |
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04/25/2005 06:23:06 PM |
this set up or display is beautifully thought out....a great add however once i caught your reflection in the ring i lost concentration on the product....good luck |
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04/25/2005 05:26:05 PM |
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04/25/2005 01:54:14 PM |
Like the use of natural lighting. Beautiful |
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04/25/2005 01:12:25 PM |
I can see you in the reflection. Not very good IMO |
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04/25/2005 01:05:43 PM |
Pretty Snap here would love to vote but am just a user and Cannot vote (sad). Anyways Keep up the good work. |
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04/25/2005 12:42:01 PM |
Very very good looking photo ! I love it, but I think it's a little oversharpened and I don't think it's a good thing we see your reflection in the ring .... |
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04/25/2005 09:54:39 AM |
Very pretty shot. If there was a way to get this without you in the ring it would be perfect. |
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04/25/2005 09:54:17 AM |
I think there's too much thing reflecting on the ring. I don't know if it was what you wanted to achieve. Is this really the sky and a house showing on the ring? |
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04/25/2005 09:32:06 AM |
your reflection inthe ring is a bit distracting. otherwise, great image, ecellent lighting and focus, good use of text , just the right choice in DoF. Good job - 8 |
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04/25/2005 04:48:20 AM |
Love the image except for your reflection in thr ring. I know how hard it is to avoid this but it takes away from an otherwise great image. 6 |
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04/25/2005 04:24:00 AM |
Pity about the reflection in the ring - otherwise a very nice image. |
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04/25/2005 02:47:48 AM |
If some how you could f got your self out of the shot..... The colour is stunning. |
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04/25/2005 02:23:21 AM |
Beautiful image, love the unusual reflection. Wonderful set up and the text works perfectly with this image.9 |
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04/25/2005 02:10:26 AM |
trying to make out reflection in ring??? noise in ring? i still like it...7...gl |
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04/25/2005 01:55:30 AM |
Very nice colors, but we are not supposed to see a photographer in an advertisement for a jewelry. Got to take a point or two for this bad lighting/reflection issue. 5. |
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04/25/2005 01:42:56 AM |
This had all the right elements, but your reflection in the ring ... |
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04/25/2005 12:40:36 AM |
This has a nice feel to it, but is that your reflections in the ring? |
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04/25/2005 12:18:30 AM |
with advanced editing the photographer should have cloned her/his self out of the ring!!! otherwise this is wonderful 6 |
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