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05/31/2005 01:31:23 PM |
*Critique Club*
Wow. That's really close. My first reaction to the shot was 'ew'. It looks like we are looking up a nose and there are seeds jammed into the nose. lol So, that's my first impression.
Focus looks really good and texture in this shot is amazing. I like the wet texture on the white part of the apple and the seeds are a dark smooth. That makes for a nice contrast in textures.
Lighting seems a bit dark in the center, with some bright reflections on the white of the apple.
I wonder how this would look at a different angle. Maybe not so centered in the photo. I think one comment said to off center it a bit, my suggestion would be to try to just make it so we are looking at it from a more of a side angle rather than straight on. The seeds could still be in the center of the photo, but we would not be looking dead on that way.
Overall, you have a nice pic of a good looking apple.
~Heather~ |
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05/24/2005 10:08:59 PM |
This borders on Porno, lol
Nice Macro-- 7 |
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05/24/2005 10:04:01 PM |
| I love to eat the seeds so this picture seems to be in appreciation of the apple seed. Good job. |
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05/24/2005 10:54:14 AM |
| great idea, nice macro, but the lighting really detracts...it's just a bit too strong. |
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05/24/2005 08:35:16 AM |
| Very interesting take on the subject. Excellent macro!! |
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05/23/2005 02:12:00 AM |
| I like the perspective but I think a different crop might help, step back and offcenter maybe. |
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05/22/2005 12:00:38 PM |
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05/21/2005 02:29:48 AM |
I am leaving a comment for everyone so no one will feel left out so here is yours...
nice macro |
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05/20/2005 09:37:07 PM |
| Very nice detail. The flesh really shows in this one. |
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05/20/2005 03:00:09 PM |
| I love the texture and the unusual shot. I could eat it! 8 |
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05/20/2005 09:48:36 AM |
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05/20/2005 01:45:09 AM |
| Wow, this looks unreal. Best of the close-ups! 7 |
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05/19/2005 04:24:13 PM |
| A very good study to accent the seeds. |
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05/19/2005 10:38:39 AM |
| That's an interesting perspective. I like it. |
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05/19/2005 09:24:14 AM |
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05/18/2005 11:51:36 AM |
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05/18/2005 10:11:28 AM |
| That looks like nostrils! |
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05/18/2005 06:46:39 AM |
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