*Critique Club*
I see you didn't find any of your comments helpful, so I'm not really sure If I'll be able to offer any helpful comments, since I seem to agree with some of them, but I'll try.
I'm not really into this pic. I think the reason is pure lack of interesting subject.
While I like the angle you took the pic at, there really isn't anything to focus on at the end of the hallway, and nothing really in the hallway to focus on.
There is the lighting, but what I notice is a blown out area to the left of the photo and a few lights down the hallway. The stripes the lighting makes could make for an interesting subject if they weren't way too bright and blown out.
I am glad there is a bit of texture in the wall. That at least gives us a bit of something to look at, although it isn't particularily interesting.
Focus and clarity appear to be ok. I don't think the suggested DOF would work here, as there really isn't anything to look at in the forground and with the background in focus, at least it leads our eyes through the photo. Like I said, I think the angle is the most interesting part, just wish there were something at the end of the angle.
~Heather~ |
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