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06/17/2005 09:29:31 AM |
*Critique Club*
Very nice image. Works very well for the Naturally Framed challenge, as the carpenters are framed in a carpenters 'natural environment'. Focus is excelltnt. I like the detail on the wood and sky. Their faces don't seem clear though. Seems like the focus is good, but maybe just too small to see much detail in their faces. Looking at it, it may be the shadow over the face of the guy on the right that makes it a bit difficult to retreive detail in that area.
The angle really makes the photo in my opinion. I woul dchange nothing about that. Perfect angle and 'framing'. Great placement of the subjects within both the frame of the wood and the frame of the photo.
I like the black and white for this image. Not sure why. Maybe it's the dramatic sky that makes my eyes enjoy seeing this without color.
Other than the slight shadow of the man's face, I would have to agree that this is an excellent image that needs no major adjustments.
Congrats on the placing and score.
~Heather~ |
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06/13/2005 11:48:05 AM |
I'm so surprised this did not finish much higher. Excellent shot, with great photographic tecniques. Very nicely done! |
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06/13/2005 12:12:08 AM |
A very good entry. Congratulations on your top twenty finish. |
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06/12/2005 11:28:34 PM |
Good angle and great b/w study with low key sky. Bumping up. |
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06/11/2005 07:38:28 PM |
This is one of my favorites. I like the angle of the shot and the contrast of the lights and darks plus the humans amidst the hard lines of the timbers. |
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06/11/2005 05:28:48 AM |
Nice sense of humor/irony! :) You did a good job taking simple/normal/boring picture and turning into a great image through exposure, framing, and choice of bw. |
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06/10/2005 07:15:00 AM |
This is awesome, baby! Perfect...! I love it. I think using B&W was a great choice on this image. It's wonderfully framed, but the picture and the building. Great title. Great Image. My favorite in this challenge. Good Luck, hope you get a Blue Ribbon! <10> |
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06/10/2005 03:56:01 AM |
Well done. Great angle. Would have done well in the Construction challenge also. |
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06/09/2005 09:43:52 PM |
this certainly fits the challenge well and is a fine picture but I think it would have scored at least a point higher if it were in color |
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06/09/2005 10:45:13 AM |
This is one of the best here in this challenge, this artistic setup and framing is very cleverly done. |
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06/08/2005 03:35:06 PM |
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06/08/2005 02:23:56 PM |
I like the angle that you presented in this challenge though the fact that the older gent is defying gravity in his stance really throws me off. The shot fits the challenge, is crisp and the lighting is good. Good luck! |
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06/08/2005 12:43:51 PM |
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06/08/2005 10:41:27 AM |
Very cool picture.. 8 or 9 |
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06/08/2005 07:05:20 AM |
I like this, nice perspective, I think the tones could be brought to life a little, would of been great for construction =9 |
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06/07/2005 03:48:02 PM |
Excellent composition, pleasing lines. |
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06/07/2005 09:53:01 AM |
fab pic, love the composition |
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06/06/2005 06:39:10 PM |
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06/06/2005 05:12:02 PM |
you should do very well in the construction challenge as well. great shot. love the angle and the black and white. |
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06/06/2005 02:11:58 AM |
Love the lighting and how the grain shows up in the wood. I like the angle at which this picture was taken. The sky makes for a nice background. |
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06/06/2005 12:24:02 AM |
Excellent double meaning. Interesting angle, comp. Good job. |
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