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05/03/2003 03:19:40 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I concur with all of the compliments below!
This image was one of my favorites for the Flora challenge. I'm glad it scored well. In this photo, my eye is directed quickly to the cactus pad on the left. Since it is in focus, it gets the attention here. And it deserves it. All that is interesting and good about this cactus is manifest in the way your photographed it.
First, the point of view from the side gives us a vew of more cacti in the background, hinting that these very interesting and engaging plants go on for some time. While a studio shot celebrates a single flower or object, this field shot brings in the whole cactus patch, with the focused pad being the supreme example.
Your focus and depth of field are superb. They further enhance the feeling first established by the point of view. They also keep the image from getting too busy.
These are beautiful and unusual plants, and you capture the textures and moods well by the use of light found here. It is soft and gloriously illumines the plants in a soft way--which is ironic because cacti are usually recognized as being harsh. But your soft lighting gives a warmth and friendliness to the objects. Oddly, the light enhances the textures of the cacti, yet they don't feel dangerous at all--only bizarre, mysterious and beautiful.
The colors are interesting, too, but I agree with your point of view that the textures and structures are even more interesting, so the limited pallette of colors is extremely appropriate in my view, for they point to the structures, lighting and textures of the plants--and in this image, these are so important.
To improve the shot, if that's possible, perhaps an unsharp mask would help "sharpen" the small details of the objects generally, but I view this photo as something I would like to have done! This is good photography, and I hope to see more of your photos in the future.
Keep up the great work!
David |
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04/26/2003 10:24:10 PM |
| Very intresting subject love to see the colors richer and the shadows deeper |
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04/26/2003 01:29:49 PM |
| Would like to see a little more contrast, color and sharpness on this shot. Nice use of DOF. |
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04/25/2003 10:20:04 PM |
| Simply one of the best in the challenge in my opinion - everything in this photo is interesting - the subject, the lighting/shadows, even the background! Great job - makes me miss Texas! (I lived there for 4 years a long time ago). Good luck in the challenge - very high score:) |
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04/25/2003 06:23:43 PM |
| DOF and point of view really provide a wealth on interesting textures and lines to this image. Great! |
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04/25/2003 04:36:42 PM |
| This must have been shot on an overcast day as you have nice soft shadows. The colors and DOF are pleasing to the eye. Your camera angle creates a nice composition. |
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04/25/2003 07:51:32 AM |
| i would have preferred to crop this just below the base of the left double branch. |
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04/24/2003 11:23:05 PM |
| This is interesting and different. Great composition; love the dof. Colors are great but, sadly, not velvia :) I do love the gamut from intense colors to very subdued ones. 9 Journey Final Score: 10, as it belongs there. |
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04/24/2003 10:15:26 AM |
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04/24/2003 05:19:28 AM |
| This is pretty good. It could've used one more "sharpen" to make it even better. Good portrayal of texture and I really like the DOF. |
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04/24/2003 12:33:38 AM |
| sharp and crisp, nice color, just not much wow |
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04/23/2003 11:15:41 PM |
| I really like the composition and the way the focus is handled. Colorsare very pleasing - looks like sunrise. |
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04/22/2003 11:05:55 AM |
| Good composition, focus. My small negative remark is that there is a ton of yellow and think it needs a bit more green. Otherwise......fantastic shot. Good clean, clear work. I like the shallow dof here. |
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04/22/2003 08:27:47 AM |
| Great example of fauna and done very well. The lighting is excellent here. |
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04/22/2003 08:17:00 AM |
| excellent clarity and nice use of shallow depth of field... the 'texture' in this photo is impressive :) - setzler |
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04/22/2003 02:51:09 AM |
| I love this pic! Nice work on framing :) |
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04/21/2003 10:14:03 PM |
| One of the best cactus shots I have seen. Never realized how much orange they had in them. Great lighting, too 7 |
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04/21/2003 09:49:08 PM |
| Nice Cactus shot, nice comp |
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04/21/2003 09:15:58 PM |
| This is pretty cool... to me they don't look to sharp, but I'm sure they are. Nice use of DOF here.... I also like your composition. I might have cropped down just slightly from the top, but not too much. Interesting photo and NO FLOWERS! Good luck! |
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04/21/2003 12:17:49 PM |
| Great detail, and the DoF works well too. |
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04/21/2003 10:55:54 AM |
| Nice combination of colors and DOF |
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