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06/21/2005 02:23:40 PM |
Not bad.
Could have achieved full-frame with correct lighting.
Still
Good effort |
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06/21/2005 01:17:04 AM |
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06/20/2005 05:59:31 PM |
| aahh yes, her eyes are the mirror of her soul... 10 |
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06/20/2005 03:05:33 PM |
Great framing of those penetrating eyes. Nice concept for this challenge and has high viewer interest.
There are some technical issues that will affect the final score.
The eyes are not level. That acts as a distraction to the typical viewer. They should be rotated counterclock a degree or so.
The lighting is unbalanced. Either you want to darken the image so the the eye on the left is in darker shadow to enhance that effect ot add lighting so that both eyes have similar lighting. In this version the right side of the nose is a little overexposed. This image appears to be in that grey area where the photographer could not decide which way they really wanted to go.
The red dot has some tiny white specks that are distracting to the viewer that should be removed.
The image focus is soft. From this distance it would seem that you either want to have it in razor sharp focus to see all the tiny fine detail clearly or you would want to do something to make the soft focus seem more mysterious or foreboding.
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06/19/2005 09:15:17 PM |
Here is how I broke down my score.
Content: 2/4
Composition: 2/2
Color/Light: 1/2
Clarity: 2/2
Total:7/10
Keep up the good work.
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06/17/2005 10:12:10 PM |
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06/17/2005 07:21:22 PM |
| interesrting. i like the litle bit of smudged makeup. i think i would have preferred even lighting. |
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06/16/2005 03:16:52 PM |
| Very nice, especially on her left eye. I can't help but wish the lighting was the same for the whole photo, though. She has beautiful eyes. |
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06/15/2005 06:33:57 PM |
| 9....however I wish for the makeup to be not so smudged and the hair on the right side be cloned out...otherwise...beautiful |
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06/15/2005 11:04:45 AM |
| I don't know whether your model always wears that dot, but at least in this photograph it looks fake. I think it distracts too much from her eyes, which suggest darkness pretty well. 7. |
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06/15/2005 05:46:07 AM |
Should have 2 flashes/lights.
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06/15/2005 12:23:53 AM |
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