Did thie really come out of a D100?! as others have said, you really should sort out your re-sizing and compression ...
Anyway, this is your critique club moment.
The noise and artefacts in general make it difficult to say much about this, it's so distracting. I like the idea of it - the two planes, but there are a host of problems: the light is very flat, the whole image is so cluttered that it makes it difficult to latch on to the central parts of it. The way it's cropped seems quite arbitrary, but that might just be all the stuff everywhere.
I guess it was pretty much a snapshot - presumably the Cessna wasn't parked there in front of the jumbo, so prehaps there's nothing to be done about the clutter, or trying different angles. You have caught something of the size of the 747, with it looming against the sky like that, but, for me, that's about all the merit in the shot. The grey, flat light is also probably not something you could do much about, but it's still a problem with the photo.
I'm amazed at your final score - I'd be interested to know what you were expecting, especially given your average vote cast being so very low.
Ed |