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12/16/2005 09:16:59 AM |
| great idea; Teh cars on the bottom are a bit too much, but the building is really great. |
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05/10/2003 04:18:42 PM |
Thanks christo, apreciate you comments and your work at the CC. Also loved your transportation entry, very nice.
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05/09/2003 01:09:19 PM |
First of all, this is a very creative entry. I like the fact that the images don't perfectly overlap. It makes this entry very original and fits better the theme than a single picture cut in 3 parts. I think you found a good balance in the adjustment of the different images.
The use of different colors for each part of the triptych also perfectly suits the theme and the idea behind your entry. Your choice of colors is very good: they complement each other well and I like the soft tones you chose.
Now let's talk about the cars. :) If this was a "regular" picture, they definitely would distract from the subject. In this case, since they add to the non-overlapping effect, I can't decide if they distract or not. I would love to see the same picture without them. This might be the one thing to do to improve this already very good entry.
Very well done.
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05/04/2003 06:23:33 PM |
| This is a very cool idea, and it's executed well.The different colors are very effective. I like how the images are progressive, but also overlap a bit. Nice work. 8 |
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05/02/2003 08:35:03 AM |
| I like the idea you have started with here.. I may have continued it by overlapping the images a bit more to make it look continuous, but it would still be separated by a thin border around each frame and by the different color tones. the interruption in the cars doesn't bother me as much as the left over palms in the tree in the central frame. Try a slight more overlap. I'd be curious to see it. |
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05/02/2003 06:04:54 AM |
| Good idea. I like the color changes. Too bad the last frame couldn't have been just a little more vertical to match the other 2. Nice pic and it meets the challenge |
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05/02/2003 12:34:33 AM |
| Just my opinion, but I would have liked this better if the three pieces were better aligned. Nice idea with the colors... |
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05/01/2003 07:22:08 PM |
| I love the way you colorized the three buildings, however I feel the sharp angle of the street and cars a bit disorienting. Good luck. Jacko. 7 |
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04/29/2003 02:11:10 PM |
| These three panels differ in their versions of the same story. Well done! |
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04/29/2003 01:43:47 PM |
| I like this shot alot. I can see that it is sections of three different pictures, as if to create a panoramic pic. The colours use is nice. The problem I see is the different perspective and angles on the line of the roof. Because they were taken from the same place, the roof line does not follow. Other than that, it is a great shot. |
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04/29/2003 12:41:35 AM |
I like all the colors.... but maybe you should have cloned out the cars. They are too distracting. Very good idea however. And the double image of the door is a little irratating... What you should have done is, in the blue pic, cropped it so half the door is showing, then that would have made a complete green and blue door.
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04/28/2003 08:47:48 PM |
| This is really cool. I wonder how this would look if you make it all one solid house but split into 3 sections. Don't know if that makes much sense, but I tried. The colors are really neat. To answer the question, I like the blue. the angle and framing/cropping on the house is good, but the diagonal of the road and cars bothers me. Can't really be avoided much, but it just doesn't seem to "go with the flow". Otherwise, great job. Good luck in the challenge. |
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04/28/2003 11:33:24 AM |
| I like all three colors........really well done. |
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04/28/2003 12:46:05 AM |
| Great idea - I think I would have liked it better as one 'shot' cut differently. |
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04/28/2003 12:42:07 AM |
| I really like your take on the challenge. The only thing that I think would be better is to have the seperate pictures put together in a way where the building is it's actual size. Because of the tree and the vehicles parked in front, it becomes distorted. If they were not there, you wouldn't be able to tell a difference. Otherwise, this was a very good idea. I like the differing colors. |
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