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07/24/2005 02:33:22 AM |
Hey thank you everyone for all the comments... I like to try things and to be a little different... If you look straight to the middle you can see the back of chairs with shirts on them and right in front of them is the pool... Perhaps there is a lot of stuff there but my point was to show the blanket, towels, shoes, and stuff waiting for the family to return because they are by the pool.. See the people at the top I didnt want them in it but they wouldnt move...:)
Anyways..I reall appreciate all of these comments...
Thanks...
Peace...
Tracy/ tolovemoon |
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07/17/2005 04:57:00 AM |
| This image doesn't have a clear point of interest. |
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07/16/2005 03:30:02 PM |
| I like the concept - the image turned out a little too cluttered. I like the foregound towels and backpack except for the oof blue blanket and I like the umbrella and kids in the background - maybe less stuff in the middle would make the idea clearer? Where is the pool, the title makes me think a pool will be the focal point.. |
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07/15/2005 06:06:16 AM |
| a great representation of a family summer... well done... |
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07/12/2005 03:02:52 PM |
looks like some1 did go and sit on the shutterbutton by accidence
and sometimes these ocasions produce a wonderful image
but NOT this time |
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07/12/2005 01:55:50 PM |
Fit to challenge criteria: 0/2
Contrast/Colors: 1/2
Photo Quality: 2/2
Composition: 1/2
My subjective affinity: 0/2 |
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07/12/2005 08:53:58 AM |
| Maybe a different angle on this one. I can not even make out a pool here. Not sure what the focus is, but it sure is sharp and very colorful. |
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07/12/2005 08:29:08 AM |
| not so sure... looking at this pic i ask myself what do i see.... maybe a baby carry cot? some socks? not sure. lovely sky and colors, but rethink your point of shoot and show where family comes into this pic. at this moment i must strain myself to see some resemblance of people back there... sorry if i sound critical, it is my wish to show you the way i see it so that next time you will think about 'how it will be seen by others' and take it from a more critcal point of view.. |
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07/12/2005 12:18:38 AM |
| Yellow is the perfect color for summer. The towels add a good forground interest. And I can (just barely) see people behind some rails. All the ingredients are present for a pleasant picture. All the stuff between the towels and the people could have been eliminated for a more focused presentation of your idea. Moving in closer to the pool would have helped a lot. |
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07/11/2005 11:36:08 AM |
| Sorry, this image just doesn't work, imo. There are too many items in the frame, its not composed to lead the eye anywhere and just doesn't say "Family". |
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07/11/2005 10:44:38 AM |
| too cluttered for my tastes but I think I get it. There just doesn't seem to be a focal point for this challenge. Nice colors! |
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07/11/2005 09:19:09 AM |
| I love the primary colors but the blankets and towels in the foreground are distracting to me. I'd crop them and it might make for a more interesting composition. Hope this is helpful. |
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07/11/2005 08:14:20 AM |
| Less foreground and more pool may have been a little clearer, but great idea |
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07/11/2005 02:34:41 AM |
| too busy for my liking. The sky and objects have very nice colors though, along with nice contrast. The focus is lacking however |
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07/11/2005 01:26:31 AM |
| While creative, the angle of the shot doesn't really tell me much. Perhaps if I could see the shoes and other items, it would be better. |
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07/11/2005 01:24:37 AM |
| were is the family enjoying the summer day? |
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