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05/22/2003 10:11:06 PM |
*Critique Club*
This is a good setup. I like the green, orange, and purple you have chosen, and it looks very natural and yummy looking.
The lighting seems to be good on the oranges and lettuce, but the egg plant is creating a bit of a glare.
The focus and clarity are ok, but because of the glare on the eggplant, it seems a bit softer than the oranges and lettuce. I like how we can see the texture in the oranges.
I think I would like to see this with the top section of lettuce cropped. So there is just one bin showing. I like the arrangement. It looks like it was just thrown in there naturally, not set up to be a "still life" kind of shot. Which I think is what makes this shot different.
~Heather~ |
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05/20/2003 02:30:08 PM |
| nice job i really like the colors |
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05/19/2003 09:11:47 PM |
| I'm not sure what it is about this picture..maybe the arrangement is chaotic without any story to tell? Perhaps if you concentrated on just the eggplant and the green leaves it would be stronger? |
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05/18/2003 08:21:35 PM |
| The sticker on the orange is distracting. Needs a focal point. Perhaps grouping the elements closer together would achieve this. Good luck. |
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05/18/2003 12:51:30 AM |
| at first this looked really snapshotty to me.... but the more i look at it the more it looks photo jurnalisty....... not sure why... i think it is the angles..... anyway... good luck...... 7 |
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05/16/2003 07:34:10 PM |
| nice colors. eggplants suck, though. |
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05/16/2003 03:58:23 PM |
| Food could have been better arranged. |
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05/16/2003 01:08:25 PM |
| nice idea, i think i may have used one of the other ones from the shoot to find a better image |
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05/15/2003 10:14:07 AM |
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05/14/2003 02:06:58 PM |
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05/14/2003 12:29:28 AM |
| no FRESHING feeling, seem green vegetables were the focus more than others |
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