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06/09/2002 09:32:00 PM |
good subject but the lighting has let you down. Maybe shooting closer in at the center of the flower would have been more effective ? |
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06/09/2002 12:52:00 AM |
On my machine, this falls a little flat in the contrast area. I want some of this to be a brighter white -- and I think you could probably make the dark areas in the corners of the photo darker without losing too much information elsewhere. But, that might all just be my machine. Otherwise, I really like the composition -- makes me think of Georgia O'Keefe. |
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06/07/2002 11:40:00 PM |
I love flower shots but would have liked to seen the whole flower |
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06/07/2002 08:22:00 AM |
Nice contrast and textures. Good job with the white on white thing. Its tough to achieve, and you managed it well. I like the rather soft focus on this, it works well I think. |
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06/05/2002 11:55:00 PM |
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06/05/2002 05:56:00 PM |
A very delicate looking picture. I really like this one. it is focused and framed well and has good depth. |
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06/05/2002 01:22:00 PM |
This photo could've been one of my top votes, the composition is VERY good and white (or pale) flowers do actually lend themselves to b&w I think. However, IMO, the picture isn't quite sharp enough and needs more contrast. I've taken the liberty and played around with it some more. Let me know what you think!
//www.pbase.com/image/2378485/original |
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06/05/2002 09:55:00 AM |
Beautiful... but a bit too grey (on my monitor). I love the curling of the petals. |
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06/04/2002 11:48:00 PM |
Increasing the brightness a little more would give a nicer range of contrast in the flower (at least on my somewhat calibrated monitor). The very center, in particular, would be improved through greater visible detail. |
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06/04/2002 11:13:00 PM |
now that is a beautiful crisp white. I wish the whole flower made it into the shot. pretty. good job. |
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06/04/2002 10:32:00 PM |
I think this particular photo is cropped a little too tight... the flower feels 'squeezed' in this view... The white petals of the magnolia don't offer much contrast in the photo... I like a black and white photo that has some sharper contrasting elements... |
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06/04/2002 04:41:00 PM |
Pretty shot, I think some more lighting would be even better though. |
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06/04/2002 06:01:00 AM |
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06/03/2002 11:26:00 PM |
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06/03/2002 11:00:00 PM |
I think that this would be a great shot even if not in B&W. I like the picture, but I think that a bit contrast would have been even nicer. |
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06/03/2002 05:34:00 PM |
Wonderful. Neat b&w. Good job. |
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06/03/2002 04:57:00 PM |
Nice but not bright enough. Sorry. Still good. |
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06/03/2002 03:34:00 PM |
This isn't much contrast here. |
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06/03/2002 02:49:00 PM |
Black? White? Plenty of grays. |
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06/03/2002 01:35:00 PM |
Could use some more detail in the center. |
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06/03/2002 12:52:00 PM |
good tonal control. It's hard to keep the white petals frrom blowing out while maintaining data in the shaddows. |
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06/03/2002 11:33:00 AM |
Why take a picture of a flower for B&W? |
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06/03/2002 07:27:00 AM |
maybe a bit more contrast |
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06/03/2002 06:22:00 AM |
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06/03/2002 05:48:00 AM |
Great focusing. The detail on the bottom right petal is really nice. Changing the exposure very, very slightly might have brought this out on the other petals. |
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