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Challenge: Rain (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Hamilton
Date: Aug 11, 2005
Aperture: 2.3
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Family, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Aug 11, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 57 out of 228
Avg (all users): 5.8649
Avg (commenters): 7.3043
Avg (participants): 5.6555
Avg (non-participants): 6.0056
Views since voting: 946
Views during voting: 515
Votes: 296
Comments: 28
Favorites: 1 (view)


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09/19/2005 07:58:45 PM
Wow --- the softness really makes this image. I feel the only thing that really detracts from it is the face seems a little bit over-dodged making it cloudy and just too soft there.
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08/27/2005 02:47:58 PM
Well done! Very nice softness. It fits the theme. I love how the backlit rain in the windows. The arms don't bother me, except for maybe being a little too bright in the lit areas.
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08/27/2005 04:33:54 AM
:: Critique Club ::

I like the softness in this photo it works well with the subject, her expression is priceless for this moment. The light is good it cast nice soft dramatic shadows on her face. The muted colors work great too, now with that being said.

Her arms are distracting from her face and look too big for her. Along with the shadows under them are extremely harsh. The highlights really hurt here as well; they take away from the somber mood.

Over all I would say this is a just above average photo, around a 6 or 7. You can tell you put thought into it and that is great. Keep up the good work.

Nick
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08/23/2005 09:32:36 AM
Perfectly executed shot. The light, pose and softness make this a family classic Im sure. Beautiful.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/21/2005 11:54:22 PM
Wonderfully emotive photo. Great lighting and composition. 8
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08/21/2005 11:44:00 PM
I've seen her nefore in another of your entries sitting by the window. Or am I mistaken? I love the soft focus this image has. The expression on her face is perfect. Great image. 6
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08/21/2005 12:15:25 AM
I think this would have been perfect as a close up on her face and the rainy window. Her arms are exaggerated here. They look too big for her body.
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08/20/2005 08:06:31 PM
a story in itself, great work
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08/20/2005 05:50:00 PM
cool filter used here.
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08/20/2005 01:03:32 PM
I love the soft lighting, very nicely done! Nicely composed, all-round very nice!
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08/20/2005 09:25:30 AM
Pretty good emotive shot. The lighting is a bit harsh IMHO, but I like the muted colors. The composition is good too.
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08/19/2005 11:00:50 PM
Very nice portrait. Great eyes and pose. I like the soft focus. Blown out highlights detract from the somber mood though.
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08/18/2005 04:40:03 AM
Beautiful young lady. Nice pose for a gloomy day.
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08/17/2005 10:00:13 PM
A very nice image! Well done!
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08/17/2005 06:28:56 AM
The very best of the "Rain, rain, go away...' images. Lovely thoughtful young model, terrific rain-on-the-window effect. Nice composition, photography and processing. 7
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08/16/2005 11:50:42 PM
Good emotive shot. It's almost too soft, but that does help add to the feeling of it.
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08/16/2005 07:37:03 PM
good classical shoot 8
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08/16/2005 05:35:14 AM
its pretty
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08/15/2005 05:54:25 PM
The eyes say it. 8
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08/15/2005 04:56:20 PM
Beautiful photo! Very well done!
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08/15/2005 04:32:12 PM
No doubt this is one of my favourites. Beautiful light window and face. In composition I could suggest that some cropping down the arms would help to improve. Anyway, excelent!!
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08/15/2005 03:11:41 PM
strong entry. the glamour/dreamy treatment works well against the foggy windows.
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08/15/2005 01:10:04 PM
Great portrait!
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08/15/2005 12:01:19 PM
looks like you've captured the mood of a rainy afternoon very well.
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08/15/2005 11:38:54 AM
She looks so sad...pretty light...a nice soft portrait...nicely composed.
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08/15/2005 08:44:39 AM
GREAT photo ! Composition and lighting are perfect. The softness adds to her mood. Good luck ! 10
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08/15/2005 12:30:53 AM
Nice ambient lighting. Pretty muted tones. The lighting on her hair is a nice touch.
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08/15/2005 12:27:29 AM
perfect, just perfect. I love the soft, glowy look to this. I never thought it would work in a rainy picture like this, but it does... nice job, 11
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