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09/12/2005 07:47:15 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Hello my name is Travis and I will be critiquing you photo.
Lets start with composition, and background. First I would suggest a slightly higher camera angle, it seems like I am strugling to look at the shoes. The background can be just as inportant as the subject, always make sure you check you background in a shot. A simple way to do this is look through the viewfinder, close your eyes for 3 seconds then open them, all while still having your eye to the view finder, you will be suprised of the new things you see that you havent seen before.
Now lets look at the lighting, it seems to be a bit flat, try changing the angle of you light, use a flashlight or a desk lamp and and put you subject in different places in the light. Take note how the lighting can mold your subject giving it a dramatic or subtle feel.
Well thats it if you have any questions or comments please feel free to pm me. I hope I helped.
Travis |
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09/06/2005 11:29:35 PM |
| Exposure could be better, cute idea. |
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09/06/2005 10:24:33 PM |
| This just seems annoying without the shoes being worn I'm afraid. And wouldn't they be bare feet considering they're under the covers? |
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09/04/2005 05:18:42 AM |
| Would have been more realistic if people had been in the shoes when this shot was taken. |
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09/02/2005 12:20:02 PM |
| just a matter of opinion but lighting leaves a lot to be desiredm also the electric cables are a bit of a distraction |
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09/01/2005 07:31:00 PM |
| strange photo. to bad the electrical outlets are visible. background and blue color dont go to well together. |
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09/01/2005 02:08:05 PM |
| There are no details in the shadows. The horizon of the bed is slanted, you should have rotated the image so the horizon ran horizontally. There is a distracting power point in the background. Attention to small details can make all the difference. |
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09/01/2005 11:35:17 AM |
| Odd. Lighting is awkward. Shoes are slighting out of focus. Plug in the right corner doesn't really go. |
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09/01/2005 11:10:00 AM |
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09/01/2005 12:38:53 AM |
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08/31/2005 09:52:19 PM |
| cute idea. The outlet on the right is a bit distracting. |
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08/31/2005 11:33:58 AM |
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08/31/2005 08:13:24 AM |
| Great funny title & concept. I like almost the whole package here except my eye gets drawn to the details of the sheet. |
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08/31/2005 03:20:44 AM |
| I can't believe 2 people had the same idea |
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