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09/10/2005 06:49:42 PM |
| Composition could benefit from 3rds. It's very grainy and out of focus. Everything seems a bit blue except the buildings in the background. Not sure of the circumstances surrounding the photo so It's hard to tell what went wrong if anything. This coulod be exactly what you were going for. Needed a bit of info on the shot and idea behind it for a more in depth critique. |
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09/04/2005 06:43:46 PM |
| nice idea but the boat is too 'central' in the image. |
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09/03/2005 01:41:42 PM |
| Nice image but a little too much haze ands glare. Is the guy on the boat lonely? Hard to tell. |
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09/03/2005 08:46:13 AM |
| A challenging shot. The boat feels out of focus, but that may be the result of a tight crop or a hazy day. |
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09/02/2005 06:11:43 PM |
| very noisy image. The contrast could be bumped up a notch or two... Maybe play around with the saturation to bring out more color. |
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09/02/2005 09:59:30 AM |
| Subject seems too centered. |
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09/02/2005 03:00:24 AM |
| This appears grainy, but maybe you meant it to have that texture .It just seems a little rough on the eyes. i like the way you captured the buildings in the background, they actually make it more interesting. |
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09/01/2005 12:18:57 AM |
| center composition sometimes works, but not in this image. the colors are all blend together. Depending on the lighting conditions, would like to see this shot again and maybe use a polorized filter to get more contrast in the blues, need to get the trees/city/hills more inline as far as color, looks a little out of focus, not sure how much it was cropped........ ......4 |
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08/31/2005 09:35:14 PM |
| I think this shot might work better if the boat was off centered to the left and a bit more in focus. |
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08/31/2005 06:27:25 PM |
| foggy day, or a digital zoom? |
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08/31/2005 04:58:07 PM |
| colours and tones are just a bit flat in this image, slightly fuzzy focus too |
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08/30/2005 10:12:00 AM |
| there is a lot of grain and a slight color cast in this frame. the white balnce is set very wrong and nothing is in very sharp focus. it almost look like it was taken in auto mode or program mode. the center waited compostion is completly breaking the rule of thirds and makes this frame look like nothing more than a snapshot. 1 |
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08/30/2005 03:59:31 AM |
| seems blurry, would be nicer composition if boat was more to left sailing into the image maybe? keep trying, good idea |
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08/29/2005 06:45:04 PM |
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08/29/2005 01:56:14 PM |
| A little bit crisper image and score would skyrocket! |
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08/29/2005 12:46:46 PM |
| This shot has quite a bit of noise, not that it's a bad photo. The large building in the background catches my attention. Good job! 7 |
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08/29/2005 09:34:18 AM |
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08/29/2005 07:37:17 AM |
| Too noisy... otherwise would make a great pic... |
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