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06/09/2003 03:13:19 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
This shot definitely shows home.
It is well focused and you have used the existing light to your benefit. This shot is effective in showing a "slice of life" that many photographers strive for.
I think it would have been made more interesting or effective by doing one or more simple things. A lower perspective or angle (perhaps that of a small child looking in) may have added some interest. Also, it may have been interesting to focus on one particular aspect of the interior, because as it is, it is busy, and the eye doesn't have any particular thing to focus on. Finally, the tight vertical crop leaves me feeling rather cramped and longing for space. If that is the impression you were after, you succeeded.
Best to you in future challenges.
karmat |
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06/03/2003 12:44:42 PM |
| Home cooking starts in the fridge |
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06/03/2003 10:53:26 AM |
| Yes, yes, yes. This is more like it - the contents of a fridge with some French food descriptions. Instant fascination. A good shot too. Lots of detail with good ambient light. |
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06/02/2003 09:27:53 PM |
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05/31/2003 10:46:36 PM |
| This doesent relate to photography or the challenge much, you just took a photo of food in a fridge, 1 |
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05/30/2003 05:00:45 PM |
| Focus is off a little. I have a hard time coming up with a focal point. |
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05/30/2003 10:46:52 AM |
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05/29/2003 10:20:11 PM |
| Very different and a straying a little away from the topic. |
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05/29/2003 01:47:04 PM |
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05/28/2003 03:22:24 PM |
| verygood every home needs one of these 8 |
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05/28/2003 12:49:15 PM |
| eat much cheese and yogurt? |
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05/28/2003 01:50:11 AM |
| I'm sorry, your refridgerator contents just do not look all that cozy to me. I just fail to feel the need to snuggle up against your cold carrots and bag of day old salad. This just does not make a very interesting shot. |
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05/28/2003 01:18:58 AM |
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05/28/2003 12:32:02 AM |
| I am on a diet , you are making me hungry. :) |
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