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09/18/2005 04:52:36 AM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
As many of your comments stated already - I have to agree that there simply is not enough in focus here. There is not any particular thing that grabs my eye and holds it. Instead I am distracted by the blurred areas making my eye draw away and jump place to place, searching for a point of focus.
- Linda |
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09/13/2005 11:29:11 PM |
| I think a little more depth of field would have shown the innner branches off more. Different perspective and a good idea. |
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09/13/2005 08:52:53 PM |
interseting branch
good perspective
but most of it is out of foucus and a small thang in the center is a little focused |
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09/13/2005 12:52:33 PM |
| not enough depth of field |
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09/12/2005 07:45:43 PM |
| Very clever idea, but I think it would've looked nicer if the branches in the branch were more in focus. Nice job though. |
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09/10/2005 08:02:25 PM |
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09/10/2005 11:33:53 AM |
| Would have worked a lot better if you either cropped the foreground that's out of focus, or else hold the focus on the foreground 'branches' in the bark and move the camera back up to it's current position before releasing the shutter. Nice idea though. |
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09/09/2005 04:22:32 PM |
| Took me a moment to get this. |
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09/09/2005 05:15:39 AM |
| The DoF is too shallow to get your point across. Good idea though and fits the challenge. |
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09/08/2005 10:23:13 PM |
| The shallow depth of field does focus me on the lines but overall, this image doesn't do much for me. |
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09/08/2005 08:34:45 PM |
| more of a trunk than a branch |
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09/08/2005 08:16:48 PM |
| Focus is off. Or did you mean for the middle of the trunk to be the sharpest? |
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09/08/2005 07:47:05 PM |
| Nice placement and lighting. I might have been a little better if the blackground was more focused instead of the foreground. |
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09/08/2005 01:49:21 AM |
| too little area in focus here. bad use of DOF ? |
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09/07/2005 10:58:48 PM |
| Not enough of this is in focus. |
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09/07/2005 09:36:49 PM |
| I like the idea! Cheers to your creativity! |
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09/07/2005 09:02:55 PM |
| There is only one section that is in focus, and I don't think it works. |
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09/07/2005 08:06:17 PM |
| I like the angle you chose and the composition. For me, I wish there was a slightly larger focus area, but that's just me. Nice shot. |
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09/07/2005 06:43:44 PM |
| i really wish that this could have been more in focus. such a small portion of the tree is. The branch closest to the camera is really in the face of the person looking at the photo. |
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09/07/2005 03:13:47 PM |
| sorry not sure where the focal point is. In my opinion for a photo like this to work, it needs a focal point, this one is all blurred |
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09/07/2005 01:59:06 PM |
| I like the shallow DOF and bokeh. |
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09/07/2005 06:48:29 AM |
| good thought, just kinda gets lost in there, neither close up or length of branch stand out enough |
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