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09/20/2005 09:27:50 PM |
Greetings from the critique club
Welcome to dpchallenge! Congrats on taking the leap. The first submission is always the hardest :)
Composition
First reaction: what is this? I see a branch and some grass, but the photgraph is lacking a strong focal point. Its not quite clear what you were trying to show your viewers.
Processing
Contrast appears to be a bit flat.. there's no clear black point here. It would help to adjust the levels in any post processing tool you're using to create more balanced tones
Good luck in future challenges. Enjoy your ride at dpchallenge! |
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09/13/2005 01:00:57 PM |
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09/12/2005 08:13:54 PM |
| i cant really tell what this is, is the stick and animals leg or a branch. is the white stringy object attached to the stick or is it caught in the animals fur. |
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09/11/2005 12:42:09 PM |
| The patchy background should be darker and plain to help the fine threads stand out. And such an open aperture has made the DOF too narrow, making the branch kind of incidental to the shot. |
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09/10/2005 12:30:21 PM |
| The lighting is too harsh and the composition does not really create a point of interest. -- the tree or branch is too dominant |
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09/09/2005 08:14:27 AM |
| Nice closeup shot, but you could darken the shadow areas to increase contrast... sorry I can't recognise it... puzzle=low vote |
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09/08/2005 09:12:09 PM |
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09/08/2005 08:30:43 PM |
Sorry. I don't get it. Fibers?
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09/08/2005 06:04:24 PM |
| Maybe colour would have made it a bit easier to see what it was |
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09/08/2005 05:27:37 PM |
| Neat shot. Maybe a little more contrast to boost the tonal range. |
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09/07/2005 08:02:18 PM |
| I'm not a technical person by any means, but there is something about this photo I like. Maybe it's the soft background or foreground branch. In any case - I like it. |
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09/07/2005 04:12:20 PM |
| sorry, have not a clue as to what that is |
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09/07/2005 03:54:10 PM |
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09/07/2005 12:19:12 AM |
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