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09/18/2005 10:04:04 PM |
*Critique Club*
Well first off, the contrast and focus is a little weird. The colors seem dulled and oversaturated at the same time. And that is exactly why---I LOVE IT!! Your choice for the theme was just brilliant. What kind of rope is that? It looks flat. I used to swing on a tire rope all the time as a kid. This brings back such fond memories of my childhood in the country. That is probably why I am so fond of it. Oh yea sure you could re-take it with more focus and the noise but I think I would leave it the way it is. It kind of reminds me of a memory. Memories are not in focus nor do they look perfect. It's great!! Keep being creative and good luck in future challenges!!
Mandy |
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09/13/2005 08:16:03 PM |
| nice shot. i like how the photo is so clear and sharp. the tire swing is a nice add. |
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09/13/2005 12:12:34 PM |
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09/13/2005 10:36:42 AM |
| Good composition, and I really like the subject matter of the photo. I would have liked to have seen this in B&W. |
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09/12/2005 07:25:49 PM |
| Nice photo -- well composed -- highlights on the rope are a bit harsh and maybe I would have hidden the loose stuff somehow to bring out the tire more |
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09/12/2005 04:55:17 PM |
| Aww I like the title. Nice job I like how the rope or string is white. It brings it out. Nice job! |
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09/10/2005 10:32:46 AM |
| Seems very dark, (maybe adjust your WB for cloudy conditions), and this causes the white rope to stand out and rob all the attention. A more muted colour than white would help. |
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09/09/2005 12:35:34 AM |
| A slightly shallower DOF would helped this shot. The background distractsaway from the main elements of the photo. Nice comp and idea. |
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09/08/2005 07:58:21 PM |
| Sweet depiction. Love the idea. Shot looks a bit dark. Would benifit from a little lightening. |
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09/08/2005 07:57:01 PM |
| nice concept and title but the backround is too distracing |
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09/07/2005 10:43:37 PM |
| now thats what branches are for ;) ... great detail and subject takes me back .. :) |
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09/07/2005 09:26:33 PM |
| I like this shot, the title, composition and border. I'm giving it a 7. |
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09/07/2005 05:00:29 PM |
| i remember my first tire swing! - 7 |
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09/07/2005 09:39:44 AM |
| This would be great in black and white with high contrast. I like the idea of this alot. Nothing like a tree swing in summer. As it is, it all kind of blends together. Maybe play with curves to work on the colors a bit. Maybe up the brightness and contrast and see what you get. This is definitely a good idea and not the typical entry - good imaginative idea. |
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