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09/19/2005 03:45:22 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a very cool shot on several levels, I like the lines of the branches, I like the sun peeking through the branch, I like the overall feel with the black and white.
Now, what is wrong you ask? Well, things I'm sure you've already heard, hang on, let me check the comments. :::Scrolling down::::
Yep, the electrical wires, while they do add more lines to the shot and could work with it, the problem I have is the size of them compared to the branches. Too bad this was a basic challenge.
What I would like to see if the shot without the lines and see if that also affects the way I look at the halo and sun spots caused because with the extra lines they too are a bit distracting. But maybe with the lines removed..............
But again, the thorns, the branches, nice job, if you redo this shot (clone out the lines) I would love to see the results.
Deannda |
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09/13/2005 10:54:14 PM |
| dont really like the electrical lines in the back |
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09/10/2005 11:13:44 AM |
| A stunning effect to break the branch, but the circle around the edge and the telephone wires are distracting. |
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09/10/2005 01:28:07 AM |
| Neat lighting achieved here. Good job |
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09/09/2005 01:37:09 PM |
| I don't really like the halo and spots, and the wires are distracting. |
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09/09/2005 09:38:55 AM |
| Neat abstract. At first I thought the wires distracting, but then I found them integral. Good job. |
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09/09/2005 05:53:13 AM |
| Nice composition and framing ! |
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09/07/2005 07:12:40 PM |
| Great photo, really like the angle. Maybe the focus could have been better? |
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09/07/2005 01:25:09 PM |
| I love the lens flare! Nice effect. |
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09/07/2005 11:36:58 AM |
| Light through the branches is nice. May want to try to clone out the wires in the background. |
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09/07/2005 10:29:02 AM |
| Really beautiful but I find the wires distracting |
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