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09/27/2005 09:01:30 PM |
| Need to define the bubbles better. The foam was too thick to create good bubbles. Maybe some backlighting would have brought out the bubbles of the head better. |
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09/27/2005 06:00:11 AM |
| does not tell me anything |
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09/26/2005 08:44:52 AM |
| I like the beer, but the composition is a bit straight forward. |
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09/25/2005 09:22:46 PM |
| Certainly foamy and bubbly. The lighting is okay (some detail loss there) and the focus is decent. The composition however really brings the potential of this image down. The background used is uninspired and makes me as the viewer think "snapshot". I would recommend a single colored cloth to help isolate the focus of the image - black would be good ONLY if you decided to use the lighting to its advantage and play off the amber colors of the beer. If you're mostly wanting to highlight the foam, I'd say a much tighter crop so only a part of the glass was showing and lighting.. maybe from a bottom up sort of direction? Not sure how that'd look in practice. Also the subject being so centered is a bit boring, maybe create some negative space and more interest by pushing it to the left or right, so only half the glass is showing. Might be an idea. I gave a 4. |
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09/25/2005 08:52:43 PM |
| For me, I find photos more appealing when the main subject is slightly off-centered or taken from a different angle. Maybe a bit tighter focus on the glass. I like your idea though - keep going :-) |
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09/22/2005 06:15:19 PM |
| The lighting is unfortunate |
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09/21/2005 09:35:54 PM |
| I keep wanted to look at the beer and not the bubbles... looks yummy!! |
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09/21/2005 07:26:14 PM |
| I would like this better against a solid background |
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09/21/2005 07:32:06 AM |
| I think that this could have been a stronger image if all the background was black. I do like your composition though. |
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