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06/11/2003 09:14:27 PM |
*Critiqe Club*
This is a nice clean image. The focus is good, the texture is very good in the fact that you can actually see the pores in his face. The DOF is also very good.
One thing in this that could easily be corrected is since the challenge was sound show more of the whistle. The other thing is there are some round markings on the brick in the background and they make a backward L shape and kind of seem to create something growing out the side of the nose, slight repositioning would correct that.
In all it is a really nice image just is a little week for sound but it does meet the challenge.
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06/08/2003 11:02:54 PM |
| Nice shot. The whistle does indeed get the focus here, but we also have time to look at the man's face; he seems pretty intent! |
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06/08/2003 01:55:51 PM |
| Clear sound, but you cut off your models head and hand and shoulder. Try to be a little less tight with the cropping. Nice use of b/w btw. |
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06/04/2003 02:38:39 AM |
THANK YOU for actually having someone BLOWING the whistle.
It's another one of those shots where I wonder why black and white was chosen but it's not as if that's terribly distracting. It meets the challenge, it's a good photo. |
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06/02/2003 01:12:33 PM |
| I think if his cheeks were puffed out more, it would give me more of an impression of 'sound' |
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