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06/19/2003 11:17:42 PM |
*Critique Club*
Very different and orginal, definately fits the office art challenge. Your focus seems a bit soft and you have a lot of shadows from your lighting.
Take your time and make sure you focus and watch out for the shadows and next time you might just have an eye catcher.
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06/15/2003 10:03:10 PM |
Great shot. Nicely composed. One thing I wasn't sure of is whether you were conveying something in this picture as I didn't get it if you were. I'd be interested to know. |
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06/12/2003 04:36:19 AM |
This looks just a little soft at the one sticking into ?? It looks a lot soft at the ones in front of that. |
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06/11/2003 11:53:32 PM |
Definitely meets the challenge, and in very nice fashion. The title, however, is quite pun-ishing. The lighting is a bit weird to me - i can't quite put my finger on it, but it may be that I'm used to silver paper clips, and either the lighting or clips themselves are bronze/copper colored. I see also that you took the time to connect all of these clips. |
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06/11/2003 05:33:07 PM |
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06/10/2003 12:24:06 AM |
Love the title and concept! (6) |
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06/09/2003 12:21:54 PM |
I think the title is clever, not sure the globs of blue-tack are that appealing..... I think you are on the right track though.... good luck, Todd. |
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06/09/2003 04:14:47 AM |
The foreground is not in focus, maybe you prefer it that way! |
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