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06/19/2003 07:45:24 PM |
GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB!
Wow, this is nice and I cant believe it didnt score better. Composition works great. Angles are very dynamic. Framing follows the Rule of Thirds almost textbook with the white dominating and then the tan and black taking up less and less. Its also nice how the hues are similarly graduated, progressing from light to mid to dark, and even the textures almost work the same. The light has an obvious patterned texture, the tan hints at some, while the black is void of any information whatsoever. A few have noted that the shadow towards the bottom is distracting. I initially felt the same, however it does at a certain change to the overwhelming linearity and sharpness of the lines/angles. At this point Im undecided. I do like the photo alot, and I am adding it to my favorites. |
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06/15/2003 10:41:46 PM |
| Interesting lines and patterns. Perhaps a closer point of view would provide a sense of mystery or drama to the shot. |
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06/15/2003 12:23:08 AM |
| This would be perfect if it werent for the tiny bit at the bottom interrupting the pattern. Great abstract photo. |
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06/11/2003 01:21:51 AM |
| I'm sure there are quite a few well lit galleries that would have loved floresence as an art form. |
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06/09/2003 06:53:00 PM |
| Nice shot on an everyday item. Good perspective and framing. |
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06/09/2003 12:44:20 PM |
| I think this would have made a nicer abstract if you had cropped out the vertical shadowed area towards the bottom of this. Other than that it's a really nice picture. Good job |
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