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06/20/2003 11:33:40 PM |
*Critique Club*
I like the black thing, and the reflection from the black thing.
The background is good, but I think that the holes in the folders(?) are a bit distracting, also, it looks like there are pockets on the folders, which create a bit of a distraction also. The reflection is nice, however, there is a lighting problem on the reflections. See how there is a glare on them? I can't see enough of the background to see if the same glare is on the background too, but it is definately on the reflection of the background.
I do wish that the yellow, blue and red all merged together, and not have those 2 dark lines on each side of the blue folder.
Maybe it would have worked better had there been a bit better focus on the folders and reflection of the folders.
Lighting on the black subject is good, and focus is also.
Actually, I like this with a vertical crop showing only the blue folder, blue reflectin and black object with reflection. This was interesting to me.
Overall, definately fits the office art category, and is appealing to look at.
~Heather~ |
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06/15/2003 12:02:26 AM |
| Nice colors, but the composition isn't very intersting. |
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06/14/2003 02:18:36 PM |
| I like the colors in this picture. Using the notebook folders as a background was a good idea. Very unique. |
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06/14/2003 06:53:11 AM |
| Interesting subject. I would have prefered this to be more head on, with less of the mirror image (since that is very out of focus)... maybe through the hole of the letter holder, that would be awesome! |
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06/13/2003 12:21:14 AM |
Cool...I like the reflection, the blue background, the yellow & orange/red borders, that pretty much covers it. great shot...
JB |
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06/11/2003 01:25:46 AM |
| The mundane made into office Zen art. Nice. |
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06/09/2003 06:38:35 PM |
| Good shot, nice reflection. |
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06/09/2003 11:53:09 AM |
| I think this may have meant more to me if there'd been more office stuff around, the main subject seems a bit too small in the whole picture. But technically a nice piece, will be interesting to find out what your reflecting surface was. |
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06/09/2003 07:32:11 AM |
| If you had cropped this in tighter, portrait style (long side up and down), it would have been a much stronger image. Too much yellow and red takes away from your subject. 5 |
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