CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
My first thought is that it was odd to see this type of graffiti on what appears to be a rural building, so it is an interesting and intriguing subject choice, I think. The picture is obviously off-center, so you have met the challenge, but it has a balanced feeling with the telephone poles and lines leading the eye to the other side of the frame.
The focus works well here, though I think I would like to see a little mroe detail in the building, but that is just a personal preference and I am not sure that it is possible.
I like the coloring, but if the sky wasn't so bland, I think it would be a neat shot in color, especially if the graffiti is in color. Technically, this is an excellent shot, I think, and is exposed well, etc.
Nice work, and best to you if future challenges.
If you have any comments or questions, please contact me.
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