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11/13/2005 04:04:44 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
This was your entry in the Transparency II challenge and it fits the brief very well.
Technical:
Good use of maximum size allowed. Good DOF and focusing. None of the processing or sharpening seems overdone, although the arm of the glasses on the left of the photo seems a bit over bright. The centre of focus is the glasses and so is sharper than the child's eyes.
Composition:
A well composed image. The glasses divide the image 50/50 and I don't quite see the connection of the text with the child, unless it is the words highlighted. It is a clever move to include the child's eyes in the one frame of the glasses and it looks like the child is actually looking at you.
Overall:
Not the most original idea but it works. There are some nice touches, the focus is great as is DOF and it is not easy to get a clear shot of a page and through glasses. Nothing has been overdone in the processing stages and your score reflects the opinion of voters. I will watch your future entries. I hope this is helpful and constructive.
Steve |
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11/06/2005 11:59:38 PM |
| Clever how that focus thing works. |
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11/06/2005 10:42:42 PM |
| this is really cool, i like it alot |
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11/06/2005 07:10:31 AM |
| 7 - Good idea and has humor. Criticism; not much, maybe a different crop, centering the frames more, and perhaps a different placement of the glasses so more befitting words appear in the left lens, depending of course what is there. |
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11/05/2005 11:24:16 PM |
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11/05/2005 09:40:54 AM |
| very clever and amusing shot. good work! |
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11/04/2005 07:34:29 PM |
| Nice, I won my first ribbon with something like this. But overall the mood is too soft. |
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11/04/2005 08:22:32 AM |
| Very nice. Hope to see you in the top ten. |
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11/04/2005 12:49:33 AM |
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11/03/2005 01:27:24 PM |
| wow. this may well be the winner! for the smart idea! |
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11/03/2005 10:32:05 AM |
| Very nicely done and creative too! |
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11/02/2005 11:11:08 AM |
| Great idea, well shot.I particularly like the positioning of the glasses, so that the baby's eyes appear framed in the lens. |
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10/31/2005 10:34:11 PM |
| I'm starting to grow bored of the picture within a picture, but I won't hold it against you...yet. The OOF filter is nicely done. 7 |
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10/31/2005 08:50:06 PM |
| Ha, ha ha! Good one - at least to those of us "old" enough to understand...ha ha ha. |
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10/31/2005 07:47:37 PM |
| clever idea! i would have liked to see how this would be with the glasses a bit higher in the photo's composition... |
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10/31/2005 12:12:58 PM |
| Well executed, great idea, Love this shot. |
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10/31/2005 02:25:46 AM |
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10/31/2005 02:21:15 AM |
| Very nicely done! I love it, very cute! |
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