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06/22/2002 11:22:00 AM |
| Not exactly appealing. try centering the pen and adding more light. |
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06/21/2002 05:18:00 PM |
| What is that a photo of? Eyeliner? |
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06/21/2002 02:50:00 PM |
| I think this picture could be made better by doing couple of things. My first impression is either it needs to be center more exactly or just to the left a little. Also, if the background was a different color, there may have been more contrast and the shadows a little more visible. |
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06/19/2002 02:38:00 PM |
| Would be more effective with more defined shadows. |
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06/17/2002 08:37:00 PM |
| An interesting concept, but to me this looks like more of a starting point. You might find an object that presents something a bit more interesting for the viewer and then work on the lighting a bit more. |
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06/17/2002 07:06:00 PM |
| The shadows don't really stand out enough to have any impact. |
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06/17/2002 05:44:00 PM |
| only 70Kb submitted here - your allowed 150Kb - post in the Q & A forum to find out how. your pic needs an upright(portrait) format rather than the landscape format you have chosen. |
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06/17/2002 04:40:00 PM |
| Yes, there's a shadow here (two actually, you are overachieving). I like the idea of the symmetry, but the pen needs to be placed exactly in the middle (more symmetry) or further to the left (rule of thirds). You are also not using the whole file size that you could've, I'm wondering whether that could've gotten rid of some of the compression artifacts, or whether it was just the light conditions and the camera... |
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06/17/2002 04:27:00 PM |
| This picture is not helped by the compression artifacts in the text on the barrel of the pen. |
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06/17/2002 04:17:00 PM |
| Interesting photo but these shadows seem a little weak... the contrast on this photo also needs a 'kick'... |
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06/17/2002 01:49:00 PM |
| shadows are quite faint to me. |
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06/17/2002 01:22:00 PM |
| more contrast would be helpful |
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06/17/2002 12:56:00 AM |
| I would have preferred to see this in a portrait orientation. |
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