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07/06/2003 09:07:56 PM |
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Nice take on the challenge with a touch of humor added. Your dof seems to work well here, the focus although not perfect is still good. There appears to be a bit of a texture to the photo as the pages of the book appear to have slight movement in them.
Only thing I see that could possibly improve on it is just a little more lighting on the right side to balance it out more. The right hand get lost in shadows as does the eye.
In all it really is a cool prespective of this challenge. Nicely done. Also nice guess on your finishing score.
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07/04/2003 04:08:05 PM |
| I think this would have done better if I wasn't cross-eyed in it! Still, fun to do, but not as fun as actually being buried under books! |
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06/30/2003 02:43:56 AM |
| Well you wanted top 100, and you got it. I am actually suprised it didn't do better. Even if its a set up, its still a good photo. |
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06/30/2003 12:20:30 AM |
| I never know what's going to come from you next. But in this shot, you've achieve such great clarity. I'm surprised it didn't do better. Nice shot! |
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06/28/2003 12:52:30 PM |
| Hopefully this is not a standard study mode when there's a camera not involved. The setup is great and very good for a laugh, though. Nice control of focus - I like the fact that her face is crisp and clear, but I can still read the text on all the books. |
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06/27/2003 10:17:21 PM |
| That happens to me, too! Nice idea and well executed! |
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06/27/2003 09:51:31 PM |
| now why would she do this?...very unusual.....are her eyes in focus? |
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06/27/2003 01:53:40 PM |
| The lighting here is nice - a little too staged for me, but the qualities to this are nice - well composed, good exposure. |
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06/27/2003 11:55:07 AM |
| This is a nice humourous shot. More contrast would be nice and the cropping of your model's hands at the bottom of your composition is a little disctracting. |
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06/26/2003 12:29:50 AM |
| This may have worked for BoB as well - creative shot, good use of B/W, and easy to see the work involved. |
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06/24/2003 02:22:31 AM |
nice composition.. a little too much black space on the right and the ligting could have been moved to avoid the hard shadow on the nose.
Really looks like burried! |
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06/23/2003 10:57:01 AM |
| As a set up, almost humorous image I like it. It doesn't seem too real though, as if someone were actually working with their books stacked this way. I do like it though. |
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06/23/2003 09:58:53 AM |
| Interesting set up, well done - 9. |
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06/23/2003 08:02:15 AM |
| Not bad... a bit too contrived - she can't be reading the book so it looks way too staged for my liking. |
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06/23/2003 03:21:14 AM |
| hi frisca! nice self portrait :) I think this works very well in black and white, and the lighting is great. I think you cropped a bit too much though. |
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