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Challenge: Adulthood Without Adults (Advanced Editing IV)
Collection: left entries
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix E550 Zoom
Location: x
Date: Nov 25, 2005
Galleries: Seascapes
Date Uploaded: Nov 25, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 30 out of 105
Avg (all users): 5.5265
Avg (commenters): 6.8750
Avg (participants): 5.2727
Avg (non-participants): 5.6313
Views since voting: 992
Views during voting: 421
Votes: 226
Comments: 14
Favorites: 1 (view)


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12/08/2005 07:28:32 PM
Howdy from the Critique Club!

You got lots of great comments on this, and I think you placed wonderfully in the challenge.

Composition

I liked the simple composition of this image. It focuses the viewer on your subject and message. I felt, however, that the camera was too close to the subject and I would have wanted to view this scene from a little further back. I would not have complicated the background or any with this, but might have chosen a lighter bg, or better light bg if there was too much black in the image from moving further away.

Colour and lighting

I think the lighting on your subject is well done, but i find myself looking for a little more light on the subject, especially near the right arm/right side would have been useful to even it out a bit. It is a bit dark and seems to trail off on that side. This also seems to affect the focus there which isn't as clear as the rest of the photo.

OVERALL, I think this was a very well done image. It would also work quite well in black and white as the colour isn't particularly vibrant or essential to the message of your image.

Congratulations on a well done image! :)
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12/05/2005 07:18:06 PM
Yep this one was way under rated in my opinion.
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12/05/2005 05:44:37 PM
Wish this had done better. Very clean image. Well focused and lit perfectly. The skin tones look completely natural. WEll done!
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12/05/2005 02:27:54 PM
A nice image. Should have placed much higher. Keep batting away.
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12/05/2005 12:29:01 PM
This one is underrated IMO, crisp, funny and well composed. Should have scored higher. Well done.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/03/2005 12:21:28 AM
Ah, yes. Works very well for this challenge. Very cute.
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12/01/2005 08:56:44 PM
Hahahahaha....nice concept...lack of contast on her hair vs the background is problematic.....perhaps a shot from to POV of her looking in the mirror....hey you get a 7 for originality....
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11/29/2005 09:06:05 PM
Hits the subject matter on the head. Nice lighting and background.
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11/28/2005 05:47:18 PM
cute idea! nicely composed and lit.
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11/28/2005 02:48:02 PM
good idea, but I would have cropped lower part a bid. 5
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11/28/2005 10:29:32 AM
Nice crisp shot and perfect fit for this challenge.
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11/28/2005 03:12:44 AM
this is a great original idea 10
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11/28/2005 01:41:26 AM
I was expecting more of this type of shot, but most of the entries focus around alcohol. Well composed.
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11/28/2005 12:35:53 AM
Really good. Great focus. I can't think of much of a complaint, except maybe crop out the numbers on the shirt. GOOD ONE!!!
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