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12/10/2005 12:46:02 AM |
*** Critique Club ***
The choice of subject is interesting. Keys can provide for some nice textures and patters.
Using flash and the only source of light can produce some very harsh shadows as can be seen on all sets of keys here. The most distracting shadows appear on the left most ring. Softer lighting I think would improve the overal feel of the image as well as help bring out some of the textures in the front most keys.
The placement of the key rings works quite well but the composition could possibly be improved by raising the right most ring slightly and lowering the other two slightly in the frame.
A fairly pleasing image.With so many keys I'm sure there's several arrangements that could produce pleasing images.
Keep shooting.
Colette |
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12/06/2005 09:11:50 PM |
| cool key collection. like the black background with the keys, and like the age of the collection. |
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12/06/2005 06:15:26 PM |
| I like the choice of subject, and the depth of field, but the crop makes me feel that I am missing out on something. |
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12/02/2005 10:01:57 PM |
| Simple but very appealing. I like the shaprness and brightness of the foreground complemented by the background. |
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11/30/2005 11:26:12 PM |
| wow, where did you lind all these keys. great photo |
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11/30/2005 10:10:36 PM |
| those are some old keys, very cool |
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11/30/2005 04:34:30 PM |
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11/30/2005 03:36:58 PM |
| Wow, maybe less harsh flash? Nevertheless.. I think that it's pretty awesome. |
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