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12/06/2005 10:27:17 AM |
| An interesting idea. Very nicely composed and executed. Focus seems a little off. Feels odd to have the shavings in focus but not the tip ot the pencil. |
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12/05/2005 11:12:49 AM |
I envy the way you can come up with an idea so simple yet so effective.
Good work. |
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12/02/2005 06:38:34 PM |
| Cute idea, hope that it does well! |
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12/02/2005 09:24:31 AM |
| Points to you on originality! I could very well see this hanging on the wall in an architect's office:-) Instead of drawing design plans on a clean sheet of white paper it is the coffee cup the bears the "blueprint" of the design. Also when I gaze upon this photo I think of someone working either in the early morning hours or late night hours on a blueprint taking a few moments every so often to take a sip of hot coffee to keep themselves alert. Lighting is good, compostion is good, and concept is good. My only critique is that the choice of pencil could have been better and more sharper. By that I mean the shaved wood part leading up to the lead point should have been lighter because it blends in to much with the lead point. I see the person who is not in the shot being very meticulious, clean and sharp such that the lines drawn are very defined - so it should also be on the pencil (yeah, I know I am one for stickler details). Also, I would have liked the number of the Number 2 pencil to have been more visible and clearer to see. Aside from that this is a very good conceptual shot. |
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12/02/2005 02:35:57 AM |
| Tilt it to the left, the angle of the cup is distracting. Otherwise, neat idea. |
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12/01/2005 01:31:58 PM |
| A great original idea. Good work. |
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12/01/2005 08:33:06 AM |
| Interesting. I like the graphic sense of it. Unusual and well thought out. |
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