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07/11/2003 02:57:47 PM |
Critique Club
A very difficult photograph to take correctly. I think the idea is great, but the main problem with this is that the binoculars themselves are too dark. All the detail of this pair of B's (esp. because they are obviously used a lot) has been lost, which I think is why you didn't do better than you did (although 5.5 isn't a bad score at all)
The only decent advice I can give you is to make sure that your image is lit properly, and try to do your best to bring out all the characteristics of your subject.
A good idea that faltered slightly on the technical side.
Keep it up! |
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07/06/2003 10:22:48 PM |
| Cool effect, and a fun shot. |
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07/05/2003 10:39:08 PM |
| excellent idea.. I am wishing that the B is a bit clearer. .. don't have a suggestion on how to make that happen. Also, a bit of reflected light across the top of the binoculars would improve the detail and depth (in the mid region). Looks like these binoculars have been thru the mil. Nice subject. |
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07/05/2003 01:00:22 PM |
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07/02/2003 03:56:02 AM |
| Nice idea, but there doesn't seem to be any focal point. |
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07/01/2003 11:52:40 AM |
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07/01/2003 09:37:02 AM |
| Very clever - I like this. Only probelm I have is that the front of the binoculars is just a little too black, so I don't see as much detail as I would like (probably because of the large dynamic range you've got with the white background?) |
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06/30/2003 07:36:24 PM |
| imaginative, the B is a nice touch |
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06/30/2003 06:50:38 PM |
| Very creative! The picture seems a bit tilted but doesnt ruin the shot. |
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06/30/2003 01:11:40 PM |
| A+ for cute idea, clever thinking. I really like the idea. The focus seems very soft. |
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06/30/2003 03:15:15 AM |
| lose the letter B. It doesn't require explanation. would be a better photo as it was. |
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06/30/2003 01:02:17 AM |
| too bad the binoculars are dinged up a bit. i like your choice of a b word. its more unusual than the rest. |
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06/30/2003 12:47:32 AM |
| Cleaverly done. I like the monochrome look to this: very old world typsetting feel to it. |
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