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01/03/2006 02:41:10 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Isn't it fun to have your own staff of models! I enjoyed looking at your kids who probably get along just fine when not called upon to choke one another. ;>)
The composition on this image is a little weak. You might consider using a drape or a throw of a solid color as a backdrop for the children. The present cloth patterns, the window and the dark area compete for attention and draw away from the story you are telling.
Then, and I know this is difficult with kids, your image is just a touch soft-focus where I think a good sharp image would be a plus. Consider using a tripod if you can. And of course, if you used a backdrop, and could move your composition so as to put that window to one side, you would have better lighting on the kid's faces.
I'm pleased to have the chance to look at another of your images for the Critique Club and I'll look forward to seeing more as time goes on.
Best regards. |
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12/27/2005 04:04:00 PM |
| Good interpretation of challenge topic |
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12/27/2005 05:25:43 AM |
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12/25/2005 07:16:18 AM |
| Is this where it started? Good capture. |
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12/25/2005 12:07:47 AM |
| haha....I woulda cropped a lil off the top part and kept the boys bottom hand in the picture. |
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12/24/2005 11:21:11 AM |
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12/24/2005 11:18:34 AM |
| Lol... I hope he's acting, but his face is the one of a real psico. Just shot on the right moment. Well done. |
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12/22/2005 09:21:19 AM |
| Scary look in that kids eyes. Yikes |
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12/22/2005 02:15:46 AM |
| Cute boys, but weak link to the topic. This could well enter the challenge for "Bored Kids". |
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12/22/2005 01:00:41 AM |
| This looks like a snapshot. |
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12/21/2005 06:21:13 PM |
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12/21/2005 02:09:53 PM |
| Yep, I can see the fear here. Good job. Poor kid! |
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12/21/2005 01:31:23 PM |
| Love his expression, so evil looking |
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12/21/2005 12:39:29 AM |
| brothers don't do that do they? rrrrr all the time. |
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