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01/06/2006 02:58:52 PM |
Bonjour from the Critique Club!
Composition is excellent. The minimalism works well in this picture. The gradient in the sky is quite nice, and could perhaps even be enhanced a touch more. The simplicity works well with the oddness of the shapes.
I like your title, but I always thought amoebas were flat, aquatic, unicellular organisms. This makes the interpretation a little difficult for me, even if they are suppose to be from outer space...
I fell like the sand, or whatever the terrain is could have been lightned a bit to help contrast against the sky. On the bottom right, where the sun is, the colour there is quite nice and it would have been nice to have seen more of the earthy colours.
I'm also not a fan of the shadow on the second 'amoeba.'
In general, I like the picture. It's a strong composition of the minimalist type, which gives it an extra-terrestrial feel.
Cheers
If you have any question, feel free to pm me
pidge |
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01/01/2006 02:24:16 PM |
| Love the colors, and the framing really gives a sense of space being so much larger then earth. |
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12/31/2005 10:57:29 PM |
| I like the vastness and use of negative space (no pun intended) in your photo. Good lighting too. Nicely done. |
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12/28/2005 05:13:33 AM |
| Simple, but strong image......................... |
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12/27/2005 06:51:03 AM |
| great negative space. little grainy, but I think it adds to the photo |
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12/26/2005 07:38:20 PM |
| Don't see the amoeba, and the blue is a little too high. I had to scroll a bit to see the whole thing. Not liking the crop. BUT the sky is pretty! |
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12/26/2005 08:21:54 AM |
| This is a different take... I like it. Thanks for giving my usename a shot! |
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12/26/2005 03:44:50 AM |
great picture - love the blue and the use of space -
but I really don't see this as a 'space amoeba' |
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12/26/2005 03:18:34 AM |
| Well composed with a good use of negative space. |
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