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01/17/2006 04:53:51 PM |
**** Greeting from the Critique Club ****
Challenge
- Relevant to the Challenge? Yes
- Is subject unique (vs. unoriginal or rehashed)? Yes
Compostion
- Good or Bad? How can it be fixed? The biggest problem with the composition is the huge patch of sky in the background that is washing out the colors and details. I'm assuming that you were shooting toward the sun. Looks like it's coming from the upper right. Good leading lines of the platform. I can't decide if a tighter crop would improve things.
- Good use of Depth of Field? No. I would use a narrower aperature to have more in focus, especially the sign overhead.
Lighting
- Good use of light? No
- Good use of shadows? It's hard to tell because the image is do dull. It's really hard to see the details because of this.
Aesthetics/Artistic Appeal:
- Colors and Contrast Needs work to make the image brighter and "Pop".
- Sharpness. Needs to to make it sharper. Better focus, DOF, and Unsharp Mash would help.
- What is my reaction or feelings? I occurs to me like a tourist snapshot. The subject is good, but the technicals aren't quite there, yet. |
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01/10/2006 11:49:27 PM |
| Good location, good feel, not 100% happy with the colouration but well done anyway |
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01/10/2006 06:44:23 PM |
| Love the purple hue everything has taken on. |
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01/10/2006 05:04:08 AM |
| Great urban sense, but the desat purple hue really troubles me. |
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01/10/2006 04:38:25 AM |
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01/09/2006 06:03:55 PM |
| I'd try for a more novel subject or framing. |
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01/08/2006 12:44:12 PM |
| Hmmm should this have been a grey scale picture ? |
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01/08/2006 07:59:12 AM |
| Good clear sharp image here..... |
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01/06/2006 05:50:49 PM |
| in this case, lack of color creates an image that is dull and lifeless |
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01/06/2006 04:14:28 PM |
| Like the purplish pastel color and the perspective; seems a little unfocused and the light at the end of the tunnel is rather blank |
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01/06/2006 02:23:22 PM |
| "City" theme is definitely there, but the shot seems slightly fuzzy? |
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01/06/2006 07:17:17 AM |
I'm not too keen on the purple tint/cast that you have going on.
i think a simple black and white would have been better. |
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01/05/2006 02:51:36 PM |
| i was wondering when i was gonna see a public transportation shot. i like it but it could use a little work with contrast and levels and perhaps make it a black and white |
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01/05/2006 02:08:34 PM |
| What's up with the purple tint? |
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01/04/2006 11:36:38 PM |
| Interesting colorisation (I'm assuming), although I'm not sure what it adds to the image. I travel to the city every day by train, so I understand how it becomes a part of life. |
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01/04/2006 11:14:53 PM |
| Composition is ok. The choice of subject matter is ok. The image quality is ok. Has potential of being really creative. - 5 |
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01/04/2006 01:22:05 AM |
| this is much more city ish than most of the shots, but your focus is a bit soft. Also i'm not sure why there is a purple cast on the shot as straight black and white would have worked fine |
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