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01/10/2006 08:36:42 PM |
A pleasant scene with the city nicely framed. Your model's position though has anaesthetised the shot, making it too personal and leaving the viewer aware of the pose. This would have been more emotive with the person more distant, perhaps walking away from us.
It may even have worked well having the person standing much closer so that we see only shoulder and back of head, as if looking daunted at what the city may hold. It sometimes helps to try and see things through the eyes of a film director for shots like this. |
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01/10/2006 07:33:22 AM |
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01/08/2006 12:50:13 PM |
I wish the figure had been a little more to the left. A bit more Sky ??? |
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01/08/2006 12:49:23 PM |
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01/08/2006 08:26:22 AM |
The silvery grey tone work well in this image..... |
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01/07/2006 04:27:21 PM |
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01/06/2006 04:19:40 PM |
Nice, but perspective seems a bit too straight-on and also a bit overexposed in the center |
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01/06/2006 03:42:01 PM |
I like it. Snow shots are tricky to get exposed properly. You have done well. |
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01/06/2006 03:03:26 PM |
Good job getting the snow exposed correctly. I still can't do it. |
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01/06/2006 01:00:33 PM |
Hi. Reminds me of NJ's Meadowlands. Perfect level of sharpness and great contrasts throughout. Swirling crop-circle shapes in the center with verticals in foreground and background. I love the composition and the loneliness of this photo. Thanks. |
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01/06/2006 02:02:50 AM |
That's a really nice interesting shot. It shows City and it shows Life. I live on the very outskirts of a large city (although much further from the centre than that shot). I like the use of black+white - it simplifies the photo and let's the viewer focus on shapes and lines and textures. |
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01/06/2006 01:31:54 AM |
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01/06/2006 12:06:34 AM |
Nice perspective and good title! |
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01/05/2006 01:29:51 PM |
I like this wintery scene, looks almost poetic, nice b/w process |
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01/05/2006 09:15:00 AM |
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01/04/2006 11:34:15 PM |
life from a distance. I'll buy that. nice use of black & white and composition to make the picture about the distance. |
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01/04/2006 09:36:56 PM |
I wish the person's head stood out just a little more from the dark trees, but otherwise, this is a lovely composition!
A lot of the "dnmc" snobs will be voting this low because of your interpretation, but don't let that discourage you. |
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01/04/2006 06:07:58 PM |
Very nice! I like the concept of viewing the city from the outskirts. I like the way the curvy lines of shrubbery lead the viewer into the skyline. Great effort! |
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01/04/2006 01:06:55 PM |
I like the idea here. Good use of the rule of thirds with the subject. 7 |
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01/04/2006 01:20:03 AM |
there seems to be a lot of noise in the skyline. but i love the black and white and the rule of thirds. i think the person ads a nice touch :) 6 |
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