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01/19/2006 01:00:32 PM |
Hi! Here̢۪s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression: Burst of blue colour! Eye drawn to the black wheels, yellow eyes and then back to the center.
Composition: Car is very centered. Takes up the whole picture. Car by it̢۪s self is a bit boring. Don̢۪t know what you had to exclude, but if you had put the car in more context with its surroundings, it may have helped. It̢۪s cropped to tight. The background provides good contrast, but does not add interest.
Subject: You captured a very colourful object. I feel you met the challenge.
Technical: Excellent colours. The blue and yellow are very vivid. Picture could be a little more sharp. Don̢۪t know if it̢۪s a result of a soft focus, or shake. (1/125 should have been fast enough). With no comments, I don̢۪t know what post processing you did if any. I would have suggested a bit of Un Sharpen Mask. DOF look good
Summary: Nice capture of colour. Context and positioning would have helped to generate a more interesting picture.
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01/13/2006 10:00:53 PM |
| simple but suits the challenge |
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01/13/2006 12:39:08 AM |
| I really like the color saturation here and the way that blue just 'pops' from the background and creates a nice contrast. You may want to try shooting this from a more unconventional POV (ie. close to the ground, elevated, or with a wide angle lens) to add more interest to the shot. |
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01/12/2006 06:39:33 AM |
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