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01/18/2006 01:23:45 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
First off, I must tell you I loved your "Food" entry. Right, don't need rocket science, just need good ideas and execution.
Okay, back to the subject at hand. Your kiwi abstract. I like the composition very much. The star shape in the center and the black seeds around it make a lovely pattern. And of course the gradiations of green are lovely.
Unfortunately, even though it is an abstract, usually people like something to be sharp. And it's likely that the overall soft-focus of this image worked against you in this Challenge.
You are doing well after only four Challenges, and I wish you well in future competitions. Welcome aboard. |
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01/15/2006 07:03:51 PM |
| This looks more yellow than I'd expect a kiwi to be. If you were to sell this as stock I'd think that you'd need to shift the hue to closer match people's expectations. |
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01/14/2006 09:42:17 PM |
| Very intersting visual effects on this macro. It really serves the challenge theme well. |
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01/13/2006 09:37:24 PM |
| almost hypnotised me.. very nice |
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01/13/2006 05:46:26 PM |
| Really like your idea, gonna try it myself later. Nicely done. |
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01/12/2006 01:32:46 PM |
| Good closeup, the centered composition works here. It looks a tad "soft" on my screen. |
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01/11/2006 11:57:28 PM |
| It feels like a burst just looking at it. Great job. |
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01/11/2006 09:44:17 PM |
| The strong color in this image works well, love kewi fruit, and this is an excellent image..... |
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01/10/2006 01:17:25 PM |
| This would have more impact if it were sharper. I like the close crop. |
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01/10/2006 02:57:15 AM |
| Nice macro of a kiwi. While the picture could be a bit sharper, the composition is overall very good. |
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01/09/2006 01:47:51 PM |
| I like the concept but to me this does not fulfill the challenge with a colourful subject set apart from the bg:-( it also appears a bit soft too |
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01/09/2006 01:06:52 PM |
| I like grain, if it's obviously intentional. Not sure whether you meant that here. Good composition. 6 |
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01/09/2006 07:14:19 AM |
| God makes amazing patterns! |
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