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01/23/2006 06:58:08 AM |
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01/19/2006 12:55:28 AM |
**** Greeting from the Critique Club ****
First, some photographer's comment would be helpful in the future.
Challenge
- Relevant to the Challenge? Yes
- Is subject unique (vs. unoriginal or rehashed)? Yes and funny too.
Compostion
- Good or Bad? How can it be fixed? Good. I assume that the blue background represents water?
- Good use of Depth of Field? I would widen the DOF a stop the based of your crayons are a little soft.
Lighting
- Good use of light? Yes
- Good use of shadows? Yes
Aesthetics/Artistic Appeal:
- Colors and Contrast. I don't care for the shade of blue in the background I detracts from the Burst of Color of the crayons.
- Sharpness. Needs a little work.
- What is my reaction or feelings? It's funny at first, but then you start to see the details. Something white under the right edge of the 'towel'. The bits of torn paper on the crayons. The lack of sharpness to the crayons. |
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01/17/2006 03:56:14 PM |
| great stuff very funny :) |
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01/15/2006 07:50:12 PM |
| Cute... most orriginal. It is also well executed to boot. The only constructive thing I can think to add would be a wider DoF. This is personal taste, but since there isn't much background to distract, I think it would add a crispness without distracting. Well done. |
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01/15/2006 01:59:54 PM |
| Thats very cute and imaginative......well done. |
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01/15/2006 07:13:25 AM |
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01/14/2006 04:02:30 PM |
| Only Yellow appears to be upset by this tragic mishap. Blue seems peeved but not overly concerned over the fate of poor Orange and Red is standing off in the background rubbernecking. I like that there is stil a bit of head left on Orange--it's rather unsettling and gory in a whimsical sort of way. |
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01/14/2006 02:59:04 PM |
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01/14/2006 08:29:17 AM |
| this had me laughing out loud! |
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01/14/2006 12:39:42 AM |
| Fun and creative shot! I like the composition you've used and the DOF here. |
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01/12/2006 10:00:28 PM |
| Very funny! You have a strange sense of humor. I like it! |
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01/12/2006 11:03:45 AM |
| pff ahaha thats awesome!, way to go |
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01/12/2006 10:17:02 AM |
| Very creative, Love the idea. Nicely done. |
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01/12/2006 01:16:47 AM |
| Clever and quite funny.....What a mess. |
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01/11/2006 10:56:33 PM |
| Funny... Very clever and well-done!!! |
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01/11/2006 09:38:57 PM |
| Creative and hilarious! Extra points for the humor! :-) |
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01/11/2006 03:30:17 PM |
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01/11/2006 11:47:53 AM |
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01/10/2006 11:18:28 PM |
| THis is so creative! I guess the orange crayon lays out in the sun in the nude? Cute picture! |
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01/10/2006 07:36:30 PM |
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01/10/2006 03:49:07 PM |
| Love it when photographers go out of their way! Full house from me! |
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01/10/2006 08:12:38 AM |
| Extra point for creativity. Too funny. See? That's what happens when you sunbathe naked (no orange paper), |
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01/09/2006 10:07:05 PM |
| Good concept and use of colors, my only wish is that the "covering" of melted crayon was also involved in melting. |
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01/09/2006 07:42:12 PM |
| Very humorous setup :) Would prefer a little more foreground DOF, but otherwise nice shot. |
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01/09/2006 06:32:37 PM |
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01/09/2006 06:15:11 PM |
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01/09/2006 05:46:47 PM |
| Clever. I love the way you made the crayons into little people! The dof seems just a bit too shallow, since you can clearly see a line of sand that is perfectly focused. I also might like to have seen this a bit more brightly lit, since the idea is that the orange guy melted in the sun. Extra points for creativity and setup! |
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01/09/2006 05:19:11 PM |
| LOL! Creative. Orange must have been sunbathing in the nude, I don't see its paper wrapper. |
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01/09/2006 02:54:21 PM |
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01/09/2006 09:57:19 AM |
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01/09/2006 08:50:57 AM |
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01/09/2006 02:45:30 AM |
| Cute idea, but I would like to have seen a greater depth of field. It fuzzes out in the background and in the foreground. |
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01/09/2006 02:02:45 AM |
| Great thought process. I predict a top 15 |
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01/09/2006 01:18:14 AM |
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01/09/2006 01:10:58 AM |
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01/09/2006 01:03:55 AM |
| HAHAHA, too funny, poor orange crayon! :( |
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01/09/2006 12:49:26 AM |
| This is funny! LOL...Love the dof on the crayons! |
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01/09/2006 12:32:08 AM |
| Cute photo, but several sections seem OOF |
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