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01/19/2006 06:10:06 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Certainly is a nice burst of color. Nice detail.
Composition:
Lacks a little punch. Perhaps the blue area shoudn't be at the center of the photo, but off center (Rule of Thirds).
Subject:
Subject is clear and nicely presented.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Colour: Nice color, and this was essential for this challenge.
Focus: Seems a bit soft to me, but this may be more of a post-process thing than an in-camera issue.
To grow its vote?:
Composition.. push the Rule of Thirds HARD... voters at DPC love the Thirds compositions.
Summary:
Overall, nice presentation. You were on the right track here and it fit the Challenge well.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/14/2006 01:53:07 PM |
| Intold beauty in these fearhers. |
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01/13/2006 06:42:19 PM |
| Nice macro shot! I like the way you've composed this. |
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01/12/2006 05:47:54 AM |
| Beautiful irrodesent colors here in this feather..... |
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01/11/2006 06:33:25 PM |
| the composition of this is not very original. |
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01/11/2006 01:21:35 PM |
| Nice! I can appreciate the composition in this. Nice clarity and contrast. |
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01/11/2006 12:56:04 AM |
| nice colors here, but i think that they would have been accented better by a background other than white. maybe a neutral brown, a blue, or green. |
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| Photographer found comment helpful. |
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01/09/2006 01:28:19 PM |
| Needs more background to make it stand out against the background. |
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| Photographer found comment helpful. |
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