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01/31/2006 09:23:39 PM |
| This was really lacking in focus. No particular aspect of the image stood out. Sharper focus and less onions would have improved the composition. |
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01/29/2006 02:17:54 PM |
| comp ok, color flat, b&w need help, great texture, interesting angle, overall just ok |
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01/28/2006 11:48:16 AM |
| Great texture. I love that you photographed something a little more abstract than the norm. |
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01/27/2006 06:42:25 PM |
| I think the DoF works quite well here, and the contrast and colours are really good together., |
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01/26/2006 01:12:31 PM |
| Ok this is interesting, I would have liked to see what is in focus on the thirds. |
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01/26/2006 08:02:45 AM |
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01/25/2006 02:34:22 PM |
| The focus appears to be spot-on. Great colour and an interesting take on an everyday item. |
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01/22/2006 03:53:23 PM |
| Interesting use of shallow DOF, but the focal point is a little unstable. Hard to really grab on to with the eyes, and the effect is that the whole photo seems to just be OOF. |
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01/22/2006 04:28:38 AM |
| I presume that it is deliberate that only the stalk of the left onion is in focus. Otherwise, I think that the colours needed to be saturated ... of turned to BW. |
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01/21/2006 09:56:10 PM |
| To me, this is too dark and poorly focused |
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01/20/2006 04:39:59 PM |
| I can see what you tried to do here, but somehow i don't feel it. I think it's a little messy. |
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01/20/2006 10:38:44 AM |
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01/19/2006 07:05:55 PM |
| Wish more of this was in focus. |
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01/19/2006 05:49:11 PM |
| Needs a bit more DOF to ensure more of the onion is sharp - but beautiful eye-catching piece. The rest can be out of focus, but at least one element should have a really really strong focus. |
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01/19/2006 09:24:39 AM |
| I'm trying to comment on all images, but not quite sure what to say here. The bottom left onion has really good focus but I'm not sure I personally would have chosen this as a subject for a Best of contest. Good luck. |
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01/18/2006 07:21:24 PM |
| I appreciate that you are trying to "think outside of the box," but the composition or subject matter just doesn't do anything for me at an artistic or emotional level. Keep at it. |
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01/17/2006 07:26:01 PM |
| Sorry but this image in my opinion is WAY too busy for it to just have that one area in the lower left corner in focus, frankly I just find this shot irritating to look at. Not trying to offend, just wanted to explain why I left a low score of 3, I felt I owed you that much. |
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01/16/2006 09:57:16 PM |
| dof is too shallow for my tastes (a wee bit more of the front onion in focus for me). Nice lighting, very good crop, excellent shadows and lines. |
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