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12/14/2006 07:54:52 AM |
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12/14/2006 07:44:30 AM |
So sweet and so lovable as well......I gotta love it..... |
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01/26/2006 11:13:23 PM |
::: Critique Club ::: ladyhawk22
First Impression - the most important one: What a cutie!! Great expression on the face.
Composition: I like the composition of this shot a lot. Having the "empty" space to the right really gives the feeling that she is watching something offscreen. And having the shot done in profile makes it seem as though we are peeking into her life.
Subject: Good choice of subject. As I said, great look on the face and such a little cutie! Good colors as well, which help add some interest.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): Colors in this shot look good, especially the reds. Nice and clean. Focus is spot on! Though I think I might suggest a slightly less shallow DOF for this challenge. I can definitely see that there is *something* in the background, but it's hard to tell what it is. This gives the impression that she's not Singled Out, merely that she's the whole photo. Lighting looks really good.
To grow its vote?: I think it may have helped voters to see a little more of what was going on behind the girl...giving her a stronger sense of being Singled Out.
Summary: Great technical aspects in this shot! Very well done and an adorable subject to boot! |
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01/22/2006 08:26:25 PM |
Great colours and composition, she has a very intense look on her face |
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01/22/2006 01:53:52 PM |
"Drop your fear of candids this week and single-out a person in a crowd as your source of composition. Use minimal depth-of-field to your advantage to help isolate your subject, and as always, be creative."
Where is the crowd in this shot? You've isolated the subject from her background but it is impossible to discern whether she is in a crowd or in her own backyard. |
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01/22/2006 01:41:01 PM |
Nice shot, but I don't see any reference to your subject being in a crowd. Offset from the background nicely, but not singled out from a crowd. |
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01/21/2006 11:06:32 PM |
Great use of shallow DOF, really isolates your subject, wonderful candid, the subject seems so intense. Well done |
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01/21/2006 05:52:02 PM |
Beautiful, Love the title with this one. She is definately in a zone. |
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01/20/2006 11:24:34 PM |
Very clear & sharp image, of this cute little girl... |
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01/20/2006 10:20:17 PM |
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01/20/2006 01:20:04 PM |
Emotive image here.
The challenge on this was to isolate a person from a crowd through minimal depth of field. Only thing missing here is the crowd. (4) |
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01/18/2006 11:49:57 PM |
Love this, she looks so intense. Great color and focus. |
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01/18/2006 07:43:45 PM |
I like her look, but would have liked to be able to make out the context. |
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01/18/2006 07:13:02 PM |
Oh My...this is PRECIOUS!!! |
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01/18/2006 03:12:05 PM |
Nice shot, but a bit unclear what the green thing is (is it a toy?). Perhaps should have included more of it in the frame. |
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01/16/2006 10:38:00 AM |
This is a good picture, but, IMHO, not for this challenge. You are supposed to single the subject out from a crowd. I'm afraid I don't see the crowd. |
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01/16/2006 03:03:13 AM |
This is a stunning portrait, very well done indeed. The challenge asked for a person to be singled out in a crowd, so it may fall a point because of that. |
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01/16/2006 01:26:18 AM |
This is a great image but I don't see her singled out from a crowd. |
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