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02/06/2006 09:23:10 PM |
*Critique Club*
Boating and Biking is another interesting piece in the Best of 2005. I think this was an extremely tough challenge since there were 829 submission, and because of this a lot of piece did not get the attention they should.
I really like the overall composition of your shot,it is a subdued but warm shot. The subject and shot have a great sense of summer and all the pleasure and simplifies of being young. The yellow flowers give the shot extra attention, if they were not included I think viewers might over look it. I think I would try differnt cropping to see if it enhances the shot or takes too much of the subject away. I think the shapes give a great feel and even flow to the shot. Good work.
Message edited by author 2006-02-06 21:26:21. |
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01/31/2006 09:16:05 PM |
| Thought the subject needed more interest. |
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01/27/2006 02:04:48 AM |
| Nice touch having bright flowers in the basket of the bicycle. Might otherwise seem too drab. |
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01/26/2006 04:39:56 PM |
| I like this, nice still life, color a bit flat but works, b&w need help, good lines, light flat, texture just ok, excellent comp, overall a very good attempt |
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01/26/2006 08:06:14 AM |
| Unusual subject placement image, but it works well here... |
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01/24/2006 03:12:17 PM |
| Really nice, the yellow flowers in the basket add a welcome bit of colour. |
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01/24/2006 02:08:18 PM |
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01/24/2006 07:51:05 AM |
| Interesting subjects, Did you try without cutting both. Might have been better. |
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01/22/2006 06:03:15 PM |
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01/21/2006 03:07:09 PM |
I highly enjoy shots like this. I don't know what the surroundings there are like, but I am wanting to see a bit more of the wall and the bike.
Very good work. |
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01/21/2006 02:56:43 PM |
| I really like the subdued colours and the central composition. I think it works very well! |
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01/20/2006 12:41:28 PM |
| Very interesting still life. I like the color impact of the flowers and the life preserver. |
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01/20/2006 10:50:38 AM |
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01/18/2006 11:41:42 PM |
| Two rather similar bicycle still life images in the challenge, and I really can't separate them in terms of appeal. They are both terrific, for the same reasons; they each combine a bicycle with a context to establish a line of speculation about location, owner, what happens next, and so forth. Each bicycle also has some intriguing cargo on board. And the two images are equally, but differently, photographically accomplished. Inevitably, the same score from me (so I guess I'll have to post the same comment to each). 8. |
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01/18/2006 01:30:26 AM |
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01/16/2006 11:28:48 PM |
| I would have liked to see the entire bike, and maybe the rest of the ring too. Flowers are a neat touch--I think they add a lot to it. |
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01/16/2006 08:41:06 PM |
| love the shapes and the color treatment. unusual palette in this one - it's refreshing. |
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01/16/2006 08:45:50 AM |
| I really like the tones of this image...the life ring and those sunflowers just pop against the chocolate brown...really nice. |
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