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To Be One With The Sea
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Challenge: Fantasy (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 8800
Location: Columbus, Ohio
Date: Jan 21, 2006
Galleries: Abstract, Water
Date Uploaded: Jan 21, 2006

Just a wave in a small stream. I liked the lines and the feeling of motion.

Statistics
Place: 84 out of 109
Avg (all users): 4.9632
Avg (commenters): 6.2000
Avg (participants): 4.6765
Avg (non-participants): 5.0588
Views since voting: 921
Views during voting: 431
Votes: 272
Comments: 15
Favorites: 0


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02/02/2006 03:27:10 PM
Hello from the Critique Club.

I usually try to figure out which challenge a CC photo came from before I look to see which one it is. It helps me to determine how the photo fits into the challenge. I really thought this was "Abstract", although I think we may still be voting on that.

As an abstract, I do like this very much. The diagonals on the right, the feel of motion, the smoothness of the "wave" in areas...along with the colors - all really work well together for a pleasing shot. I would probably have cropped just slightly more from the top. The small curl of wave, just above the darker spot (which is just above the reflecting area) has just the top portion cut off, which I find a bit distracting. I would have cropped just above the dark area, as I think it brings the eye more to the central part of the photo.

Technically, I think the blur really does work here. It feels more like motion to me, less like out of focus and I think that is an important distinction. Exposure seems excellent. Some might think a bit dark, but I think the details are there and I personally like the darker shades to the shot.

For the fantasy challenge, I don't believe there is a strong connection. I wouldn't go so far as to say it doesn't meet the challenge - but I wouldn't give extra points for a strong connection. If I voted, I probably would have given this shot a 7.

Hope this is helpful!
Judy
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/29/2006 10:31:49 PM
very nice and very inviting beauty. Bumping up.
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01/28/2006 02:44:41 AM
How did you do that?
01/27/2006 10:10:57 PM
Wow
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01/27/2006 08:52:37 PM
very pretty
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01/27/2006 12:10:34 PM
I like theis photo because the use of a slowshutter speed captures the movement of the water.
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01/25/2006 04:30:51 PM
Hmmm one with the sea, not for me. But this is a nice shot with great flow.
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01/25/2006 05:34:17 AM
This is so magical to me..... I love it.....
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01/25/2006 01:26:35 AM
Lovely colors and motion!
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01/23/2006 06:32:08 PM
i'm sorry, but i don't see the fantasy here.
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01/23/2006 04:11:10 PM
very nice picture
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01/23/2006 01:07:02 PM
gorgeous beautiful picture, but dnmc imho. I still give it a 6 just for being so wonderful.
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01/23/2006 07:19:59 AM
I like the painterly effect
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01/23/2006 01:59:17 AM
This is beautiful. To me it looks more like a river than the ocean - is it the ocean? Love the reds and browns in the water. Hope you do well.
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01/23/2006 01:27:18 AM
great abstract and colours
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