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02/09/2006 07:43:35 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Anyone who does a Tribute to Imogen Cunningham is my kind of photographer. That was a lovely tribute.
Okay, now to the matter at hand. I think your technical excellence paid off for you in this shot. It is perfectly exposed and nicely interpreted. And you scored well.
Nevertheless, I'm going to suggest that your composition, taking up almost exactly half of the frame seemed to be done 'on purpose' to fullfill the Challenge requirements. (Not that you did it that way, just that it looks that way.) And then the vertical piece that holds the balance in place. (boy, am I being picky here) I wonder if just a touch more of it at the top showing would help balance the composition just a little better.
Okay, that's all I'm going to critique on what really is a very nice image and one that I enjoyed looking at. Feel free to PM me if I am completely 'all wet' and you want to set me straight.
;>)
Best regards, Alice |
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02/04/2006 08:59:51 PM |
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