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One Half of the Story
One Half of the Story
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Challenge: Off-Centered Subject II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 APO Macro Super for Nikon
Location: Alpena, Michigan
Date: Jan 25, 2006
Aperture: f10
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/500 sec.
Galleries: Still Life, Studio
Date Uploaded: Jan 25, 2006

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Place: 110 out of 357
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Votes: 189
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02/09/2006 07:43:35 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

Anyone who does a Tribute to Imogen Cunningham is my kind of photographer. That was a lovely tribute.

Okay, now to the matter at hand. I think your technical excellence paid off for you in this shot. It is perfectly exposed and nicely interpreted. And you scored well.

Nevertheless, I'm going to suggest that your composition, taking up almost exactly half of the frame seemed to be done 'on purpose' to fullfill the Challenge requirements. (Not that you did it that way, just that it looks that way.) And then the vertical piece that holds the balance in place. (boy, am I being picky here) I wonder if just a touch more of it at the top showing would help balance the composition just a little better.

Okay, that's all I'm going to critique on what really is a very nice image and one that I enjoyed looking at. Feel free to PM me if I am completely 'all wet' and you want to set me straight.
;>)

Best regards, Alice
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02/04/2006 08:59:51 PM
Great idea that works well.....
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