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03/18/2006 10:45:34 AM |
| This is really sophisticated. I could see this as a Valentine card (you should consider trying to sell it to a greeting card company, actually, but first clone out the shadow). I didn't vote in this challenge but this would very likely have been my top pick. Once again, I find myself humbled by a young'un. ;D |
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02/10/2006 12:59:23 PM |
| Aaawe, this one is cute. :) Love everything about it, even the corners. Shoulda scored much higher. |
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02/07/2006 08:07:53 PM |
| Very nice. I just wish that blue tinge wasn't in the bottom corners, or that it was in the top corners. It feels a touch off balance |
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02/07/2006 04:36:49 PM |
| I think I want more contrast with the piece of paper with the background, you know? |
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02/07/2006 11:25:02 AM |
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02/07/2006 09:15:02 AM |
Very original take on the subject and boldly presented.
Deserves to do well..Good Luck. |
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02/07/2006 04:12:24 AM |
| too much white space, lighting could be better, vignetting is distracting - but clever idea and nice colours |
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02/07/2006 01:21:25 AM |
| I love the idea. I might have scored it higher if the edge of the tag hadn't dissappeared into the background. Maybe a pink tag? |
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02/06/2006 05:00:35 PM |
| fabulous - except for the gray corners! |
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02/06/2006 04:04:37 PM |
| This is so simply classy, clear, tasteful and tasty. Most clever. Ten |
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02/06/2006 11:10:19 AM |
| This is a great idea, and executed very well. I think it may have been stronger if it wasn't quite so centered. . but I really love the idea and the way it looks. Good job. |
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02/05/2006 08:02:59 PM |
| I like this idea. I would try levels or curves to see if I could get the background completely white. It might bring out more details of the candy wrapper, too. (Or maybe not, I'm not that experienced yet!) I also think having the candy off center would add more interest. |
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02/05/2006 07:45:28 PM |
| that is so creative and cute |
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02/05/2006 04:23:22 PM |
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02/03/2006 08:50:42 PM |
| Very cool. I think it might have been improved a little without the vignetting in the bottom 2 corners. |
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02/03/2006 07:03:19 PM |
| Visible viginetting, maybe on purpose, I would crop in tighter and perhaps have the subject slightly off center, great picture though :) |
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02/03/2006 06:56:43 PM |
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02/03/2006 03:34:53 PM |
| Very nicely done. I think this one really benefits from the white space. However, I think there might just be a little too much white space. There appears to be some vignetting on the corners, so I wonder if a slightly tighter crop would have helped. All in all, this is a really good shot. +7 |
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02/03/2006 11:04:26 AM |
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02/03/2006 01:00:51 AM |
| I think that this would have been a stronger presentation if you hadn't blown out the edges of the paper. On my monitor the text almost appears to be written on the background; only the shadow remains to indicate otherwise. The exposure meter in your camera will assume that on a properly exposed image, averaging the brightness of the entire frame will produce a uniform grey image; usually this heuristic works, but it is dead wrong when shooting a small object against a white background. With a shot like this you'll need to adjust your exposure to compensate for your camera's assumptions. |
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02/02/2006 09:21:05 AM |
Generally not a bad image and a marvelous concept.
You might consider two changes:
1-Try a smaller crop or apply different post processing to remove the distracting vignetting and/or color casting from showing up on the corners. 2-Position the candy centered at either the upper or lower left "rule of thirds" intersection point for increased viewer esthetics. |
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02/02/2006 01:07:17 AM |
| Very very centred .. good picture but could have worked on thirds. |
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02/01/2006 11:55:17 PM |
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02/01/2006 07:17:28 PM |
| Cute. Not sure I like the vignetting in the corners, I would have either made it more pronounced or cropped it out all together. |
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02/01/2006 03:29:40 PM |
| CUTE!!! Would be a great ad campaign shot. Bumping up. 9 |
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02/01/2006 02:27:44 PM |
| I think you should have cut the borders away (vignetting) and maybe move the object to be on 1/3 of the surface. |
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02/01/2006 11:22:44 AM |
| Love the concept- VERY original. Am a little bothered by the vignetting of blue in the corners. |
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02/01/2006 10:21:31 AM |
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02/01/2006 08:00:25 AM |
| This is very effective. Breaking all the rules with a small centrally placed object on a large palin background somehow does the trick! |
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02/01/2006 01:56:10 AM |
| I like this photo a lot. I'm not sure the border adds anything or helps it at all. I'd lose it. 10. |
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